Oh I liked that chapter (I am guessing my review got lost when my electric went out!)
| Title: Hogwarts
| 25 Jun 2010 6:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Anon #37 (Anonymous)
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This story is so adorable! Thank you for updating.
I love the developing relationship between Snape and Potter. I would like to see Snape tutoring Potter some more, maybe in defence? maybe in potions?
I would also like to see the rest of teh 1st year events and how they may have been different with Potter more trusting of Snape - however you want to play that! - and I wonder if Snape will find out that Quirrel's gaze hurts Harry's scar and make the connection?
One thing I would NOT like to see is Harry and Draco making friends, so many fanfics have that, it is really overdone, it's usually not believable (with a few exceptions like AYLNO) and in this fic Draco works so well as a mean antagonist making fun of Harry's stutter. I WOULD like to see Snape having to deal with conflicting loyalties/obligations over Draco and Harry's antagonism.
Really enjoy this fic, thanks for writing it and sharing!
| Title: Hogwarts
| 25 Jun 2010 5:48 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant story... can't wait for more
| Title: Hogwarts
| 25 Jun 2010 10:26 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, when will Snape decide Harry belongs with him, the part about Harry being sad for leaving Wendron was upsetting, I want harry there permanently! Please.
Author's Response: I have things laid out up to the end of this story and some planned for the sequel. In this story you will not see Harry in Wendron again. But fear not, there will be good Harry/Severus interaction.
If you are going to have romance in this please don't have Harry/Ginny xx
Author's Response: Romance wasn't on the agenda. Harry is only eleven. Those teenage hormones start rearing their heads about this time, but I don't like to do the romance between eleven year old when I write. And he's only met Ginny the one time at the train station.
| Title: Hogwarts
| 25 Jun 2010 12:31 am
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| Reviewer: Periwinkle (Anonymous)
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Cool! When I first started reading this, I didn't like the stutter, but now I have warmeed up to it. Keep up the good work!
PS: Looking forward to Snape's reaction to the truth about Harry's home life!
Good chapter. harry is one happy little boy, hope it remains that way.
I always enjoy scenarios where there is misunderstanding between harry and snape - whether it be snape thinks harry is the culprit of a misdeed or harry not understanding something snape says
I feel so bad for Harry, he is such a sweet boy, I hope him and Snape get closer soon, I want some mushy moments pretty please :)
Awwww! What an amazing chapter! So cute at the end! Can't wait to see what's next!
So, Harry never saw the Mirror of Erisde? What would he see now? Would he see that little cottage and Snape standing in the door? I imagine something along those lines. . .
Wonderful story-I just found it and I'm looking forward to "what's next"
Thanks for the enjoyable read.
V.
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