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Title: Hello Uncle Vernon 21 Jun 2010 7:01 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The problem with this is that the police would arrest Dursleys for child endangerment, which is the problem for all stories where the Dursleys torture and beat Harry.

    Author's Response: Except that in this story the Dursley's never actually called the police, because they knew that would happen.  They just threatened Harry with it and he believed them and left.  As for the other stories, nobody ever actually called the police.  The police don't always know everything that is going on in people's homes unless somebody tells them.  A lot of times child endangerment, neglect, and abuse goes unnoticed sadly.  I know of many cases of friends growing up that had this issue, and they didn't tell anybody for fear of the consequences, and nobody ever called the police for them.
Title: A Spell Gone Right 21 Jun 2010 4:36 pm
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *Giggles and blushes* thanks! When I saw it I was absolutely gobsmacked! Ah well. It was quite an interesting chapter...imagine! Hermione lying? Wow...never thought she'd be one to lie.
Title: A Spell Gone Right 21 Jun 2010 4:36 pm
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *Giggles and blushes* thanks! When I saw it I was absolutely gobsmacked! Ah well. It was quite an interesting chapter...imagine! Hermione lying? Wow...never thought she'd be one to lie.
Title: A Spell Gone Right 21 Jun 2010 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    The next meeting between Harry and Snape should be interesting.
Title: A Spell Gone Right 21 Jun 2010 1:21 pm
Reviewer: Bratling (Signed) [Report This]
    Marbles can supposedly help, too.
Title: A Spell Gone Right 21 Jun 2010 12:51 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    VEry Good I love the steps snape hads taken to help harry I look forward to more!
Title: A Spell Gone Right 21 Jun 2010 10:01 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    About the singing, there's a country singer (i can't remember his name but he's been in some Burt Reynolds films) that Sings just fine, but Stutters badly when he talks.
Title: A Spell Gone Right 21 Jun 2010 9:54 am
Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) [Report This]
    I remember watching on Scientific American Frontiers years ago, they did a piece about stuttering. One of the big mysteries about stuttering is when the stutterer is saying something at the same time another person is saying it, they don't stutter. That phenomena resulted in someone developing something to put in your ear that would pick up what you are saying and play it back in a different voice almost at the same time you are talking. Its like 90% effective in curing stuttering. You may try something like that in your story.
Title: Levicorpus 21 Jun 2010 5:32 am
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this fic! I've never seen a fic in which Harry had a stutter before and, so far, it is very well done. I just would like to see Harry get one over on Malfoy, which I'm sure you were planning anyway!
Title: Levicorpus 21 Jun 2010 4:21 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting. I can't wait to see what you do with this!

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