| Title: Eyes and Ears
| 14 Aug 2010 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for this and I'm so sorry for your troubles i hope all goes well now as I'm late to review due to holidays
This was awesome! I love the new twists on the old tale! Hope your neiece and nephew are recovering well. Stupid drivers!
| Title: Eyes and Ears
| 11 Aug 2010 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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I hope everything is okay with your neice and that your hand recovers too. I loved this part, it was so well put together. But I felt really bad when Shelby died. Poor girl! Sev shouldn't feel guilty though, how could he have known about the fire? Such a great story! Am eager to read more!
Aww poor Shelby! I really liked her. I also liked how you made Sev and Eileen spies, that's a neat twist. Sev's meeting with Lily was good too, though I felt bad for him, since Lily's mistake cost him the woman he loved.
| Title: Eyes and Ears
| 26 Jul 2010 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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I hope they're doing okay! I loved this chapter, but do take your time on the next one. Family is more important. I'll be praying for them. I must say that the end was really sad though. Poor Shelby. She was to young to end in such a horrible way.
Sometimes sorry isn't enough. Lily should never have relied on rumors and assumptions to make her decision when it came to whether or not she would continue being friends with Severus. She destroyed their friendship, not him. And then, to make things worse, she continued in her relationship with Potter to the point of actually marrying him, despite all the vicious and nasty things he had done to Severus. Why should he forgive her?
| Title: Eyes and Ears
| 26 Jul 2010 9:03 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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My thoughts and prayers go out to your niece and her son, may they be getting stonger each day. Great chapter, it's hard when you can't let go of your feelings for someone. Take care of yourself!
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