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Title: All Hallows Eve 09 Aug 2010 7:54 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool chapter, though it's hard to imagine Bella as seer. I wonder if the ability would come to those with evil intent?

    Gabriel is fantastic, his warm presence is carried through the story so well!
Title: Eyes and Ears 26 Jul 2010 11:49 pm
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope they're doing okay! I loved this chapter, but do take your time on the next one. Family is more important. I'll be praying for them. I must say that the end was really sad though. Poor Shelby. She was to young to end in such a horrible way.
Title: Eyes and Ears 26 Jul 2010 9:52 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Sometimes sorry isn't enough. Lily should never have relied on rumors and assumptions to make her decision when it came to whether or not she would continue being friends with Severus. She destroyed their friendship, not him. And then, to make things worse, she continued in her relationship with Potter to the point of actually marrying him, despite all the vicious and nasty things he had done to Severus. Why should he forgive her?
Title: Eyes and Ears 26 Jul 2010 9:03 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My thoughts and prayers go out to your niece and her son, may they be getting stonger each day. Great chapter, it's hard when you can't let go of your feelings for someone. Take care of yourself!
Title: But For A Dog 13 Jul 2010 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. You never fail to amaze. Kudos.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! I just updated this again.
Title: But For A Dog 11 Jul 2010 11:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter we ahould all listen to our pets

    Author's Response: Yes that is so true! I have just updated this again.
Title: But For A Dog 08 Jul 2010 9:18 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    If Lily wanted to be friends with Severus again then she should have done so. Even if she was 'dating' James, it didn't mean that she didn't have the right to have friends that he didn't like.

    I'm really glad that Severus had at least on real friend. Gabe saved him from himself and I'm glad he was there.

    Author's Response:

    That's very true. Unfortunately, Lily chose to believe James when he told her Severus was going dark. 

    He did indeed and that's what a good dog does, loves you in spite of all your mistakes and saves you from making terrible ones.

    I've just updated again!

Title: But For A Dog 08 Jul 2010 7:13 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww!! That's so lovely! Although it's sad Sev turned down that road at first, I'm glad he realized a mistake. Sometimes it really does take something serious like that to wake someone up out of that darkness they've put themselves in. If I could, I'd give Gabe a huge bone too!

    I LOVED Gabe's thoughts, about love and friendship! I swear I had tears in my eyes when I read that. It was so touching! And the poem too! Brilliant!

    And no problem with the defense on ff.net. That jerk had no right to do that to you, and he needed a good stern "talking to" if you understand me! ^_^

    Great update!! :)

    Author's Response:

    You're right. Sometimes you get so lost that you can't see a path out. 

    Aww thanks! I sincerely think that if  dogs could talk, that's what they'd say. 

    Thanks again! By the way, I've updated this and IC too!

Title: The Great Werewolf Caper 08 Jul 2010 12:02 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great to be able to review as it doesn'y work for me on fan fic. Love this story and Gabe is wonderful thank you

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much, always glad to hear from you!

    I've just posted the next chapter by the way!

Title: The Great Werewolf Caper 07 Jul 2010 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job! I like how you've changed some elements and kept others. I especially like that justice by McGonagall was served this time around.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and here's the next chapter.

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