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Reviews For But For A Dog
I also liked how Sev's son--Harry I think it is--made sure his dad was taking his medicine! Aww!
I'm glad that Dumbledore was amenable to Severus bringing Gabe to school with him. It would have broken Severus' heart to be separated from his familiar. Author's Response: You are right and he certainly needed them, otherwise he might not have gotten to compete. Oh yes it would have. So now everyone's happy. And the next chappie's up!
"If they're right." I said coldly.-This made me laugh so hard I nearly choaked on my drink! I'm not sure why, but I just love this line! It sounds like something someone in my family might say, I guess. It was just so funny! "Snot-Brat went first, his real name was Gene Tolliver. God, he even sounded like a toff!" - This also made me chuckle. Good ol' Snape snark! HAHA! But seriously, that kid was a snot. Didn't like him in the least. But I'm so happy that Sev won! And it was so cute with Lily sticking up for him...then getting in trouble...haha! My mom always said I should've been a boy too. Lily sounds like my kinda friend! I think Severus's loyalty to Gabe is wonderful! Those two just make me grin all over the place! I can't wait to see what happens with Gabe and Fang! Oh my that should be fun! I'm sure Sev's going to have to learn to get on with Hagrid then! XD Wonderful update!! :D Author's Response: I'm glad you share my sense of humor. i thought it was funny too. No, and you weren't meant to like him, he was a nasty little idiot. Yeah, see, he's got the attitude even then. She reminds me of my older sister, who used to beat up boys when they teased my brother, who was younger than she was.
Yes, he will be getting along with both of them and you don't have to wait because the next chappie's up of this and a new story--a one-shot, called Object of Affection. It goes with one of my other series, but you don't have to read the previous stories to enjoy it, it's a humor piece.
Author's Response: Yes I wanted to make Eileen a strong character here and I really like how she is turning out. There's a new chapter up now!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's another chapter waiting for you to read and a new story called Object of Affection, if you want to read a humorous Severus/Harry story.
I felt bad for Severus at the end and happy that Dumbledore allowed him to bring Gabe, he's going to need him. Author's Response: Thanks so much! You're right, Severus will need him . . .a lot!
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