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Title: A Collie Cometh 28 Jun 2010 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked reading about Sev's thoughts on the different Houses and how he and Lily handled the Marauders. So James' cousin is a prefect. Huh. That explains a lot on why he got away with so much.

    I also liked how Sev's son--Harry I think it is--made sure his dad was taking his medicine! Aww!
Title: Not Without My Dog! 28 Jun 2010 11:00 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how you captured the feel of the dog show and how nervous Sev was, poor kid. I also love how you make the bond between Gabe and Sev so very strong and meaningful. What a lovely story!
Title: Of Candles and Ouija Boards 28 Jun 2010 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was really scary! I would have been freaking out! Though I did light curtains on fire once. Loved how they all got through it and good for Mrs. Evans for punishing Petunia since she started it. I would have gone back for my dog too.
Title: Not Without My Dog! 28 Jun 2010 2:44 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's very clear that the one boy was trying to psych Severus out, because he knew that Gabriel was the superior dog. I'm glad that Lily and Eileen were able to keep Severus from getting himself disqualified because of that little pissant.

    I'm glad that Dumbledore was amenable to Severus bringing Gabe to school with him. It would have broken Severus' heart to be separated from his familiar.

    Author's Response:

    You are right and he certainly needed them, otherwise he might not have gotten to compete.  Oh yes it would have.  So now everyone's happy.

    And the next chappie's up!

Title: Not Without My Dog! 27 Jun 2010 7:50 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    "You always let girls do your talking for you?"
    "If they're right." I said coldly.-This made me laugh so hard I nearly choaked on my drink! I'm not sure why, but I just love this line! It sounds like something someone in my family might say, I guess. It was just so funny!

    "Snot-Brat went first, his real name was Gene Tolliver. God, he even sounded like a toff!" - This also made me chuckle. Good ol' Snape snark! HAHA! But seriously, that kid was a snot. Didn't like him in the least.

    But I'm so happy that Sev won! And it was so cute with Lily sticking up for him...then getting in trouble...haha! My mom always said I should've been a boy too. Lily sounds like my kinda friend!

    I think Severus's loyalty to Gabe is wonderful! Those two just make me grin all over the place! I can't wait to see what happens with Gabe and Fang! Oh my that should be fun! I'm sure Sev's going to have to learn to get on with Hagrid then! XD Wonderful update!! :D

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you share my sense of humor. i thought it was funny too.

    No, and you weren't meant to like him, he was a nasty little idiot. Yeah, see, he's got the attitude even then.

    She reminds me of my older sister, who used to beat up boys when they teased my brother, who was younger than she was. 

     

    Yes, he will be getting along with both of them and you don't have to wait because the next chappie's up of this and a new story--a one-shot, called Object of Affection. It goes with one of my other series, but you don't have to read the previous stories to enjoy it, it's a humor piece.

Title: Not Without My Dog! 27 Jun 2010 6:23 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    that was brilliant! the dog show sounded great and I love Eileen here, she rocks. I can sympathize with Severus and am glad he could take Gaby with him to school.

    Author's Response: Yes I wanted to make Eileen a strong character here and I really like how she is turning out.  There's a new chapter up now!
Title: Of Candles and Ouija Boards 27 Jun 2010 6:11 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was some incident! Good thing no one was seriously hurt. now that explains why sev is so strict in his classroom, because you are working with dangerous substances. great chapter!
Title: Not Without My Dog! 27 Jun 2010 4:18 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. Not much else to say besides Kudos is there?

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's another chapter waiting for you to read and a new story called Object of Affection, if you want to read a humorous Severus/Harry story.
Title: Not Without My Dog! 27 Jun 2010 1:36 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the dog show and I've seen stuff like that happen before, with the underdog winning (pun intended) Everything was beautifully described and I'm glad that nasty boy didn't win, he needed a good kick in the pants.

    I felt bad for Severus at the end and happy that Dumbledore allowed him to bring Gabe, he's going to need him.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! You're right, Severus will need him . . .a lot!
Title: Of Candles and Ouija Boards 27 Jun 2010 1:30 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry I couldn't review a couple of days before, my Internet was on the fritz. Anyway, I thought this chapter was wonderful, you showed how even the budding potions prodigies can have a disaster and making candles without knowing exactly what you're doing could be deadly. A friend of mine burned off seven layers of skin when hot wax fell on her when she was making candles once. They're lucky they didn't get burned too. I loved how Sev went back for his dog, I would have! Eileen's reaction was very believable and I'm glad Tuney got in trouble too.

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