A very sweet start to your story!
-Sniff- Can I smack 'auntie' now or will you be using her again in another chapter?
Sweet scene with bathtime reassurances. Nicely done. (I still want to smack auntie around...... grrrrrrrr.)
| Title: Freaks Aren't Allowed
| 01 Dec 2010 3:53 am
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| Reviewer: Imai (Signed)
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I was reading this on Fanfiction.net like 10 minutes ago! But then I couldn't view the story! So I decide to go here and I find the same exact story!!!!
But the story seems really good so far!
Author's Response: Yeah, Fanfiction.net was down for a little while tonight. Glad you looked here, and I'm glad you're liking it!
This is ADORABLE!
Snape giving Harry a bath was prety much the cutest scene ever!
I love this! :)
Harry is so cute! And I love how you portray Snape. Good story. I'm headed for more.
| Title: Freaks Aren't Allowed
| 03 Jul 2010 3:40 am
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| Reviewer: Taryn (Signed)
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Snape enveloping Harry in his robes is really entertaining to imagine. Especially because it reminds me of a batlike Snape, and his robes are his wings and...yeah. This is really adorable and sad so far and I can't wait to read the rest. It's not very clear to me how Harry got to Snape's house but that is probably because I wasn't paying attention or something. Also, does Snape not know who Harry is? WILL SOMETHING TERRIBLE HAPPEN WHEN HE FINDS OUT? Perhaps I'll find out if I continue reading.
Author's Response: Try re-reading the first chapter for you first question, and the second chapter for your second. :)
Aww! Poor little Harry! But his mum is still looking out for him. :) And Severus was being very patient! Yay Sev! Nice chapter!
| Title: Freaks Aren't Allowed
| 29 Jun 2010 10:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful start to the story even if Severus is OOC thank you
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