Such an adorable story! All of your characters are written so well and the story flows really nicely. I can't wait for the rest!
aw Harry was so cute conversing with "Capt'n!" Can I please, please give Albus a certain cursed ring, enhanced to act faster? I'd AK, but that could be proven with my wand...unless...it was wandless...hmm...lol Good job!
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| 28 Jun 2010 3:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Sun (Anonymous)
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Thanks ,a very quick update!
Suggestions:
tiny boy,small child, cub, youngling,little imp (mischievous child ) etc...;)
Author's Response: The first two I've been using already, cub is more of a Remus thing, youngling reminds me far too much of Star Wars and Yoda (lol), but little imp . . . now you may have something there. Hmm. I shall ponder.
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| 28 Jun 2010 1:25 pm
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| Reviewer: hisluv (Anonymous)
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This is adorable, I love your Harry and Sev and can't help being intrigued as to where this is going, will we see more of Lily? Can't wait to read more and find out.
Kerry xxx
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| 28 Jun 2010 12:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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I know it is early days, but I am really enjoying this one. Just found it last night and a new chappie too now. I love how you've written Minnie, as she's one of my favorite characters and am intrigued to see where you take Albus. Love Severus here, very protective, as I think he would be, also probably possessive towards his child later on and little Harry is just adorable. Anyway, thanks a lot!
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| 28 Jun 2010 9:08 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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