Harry’s trust in his Tall Man is simply heart melting. I’m so glad that Poppy remained professional, despite her initial reservations
Can you imagine having to sit there and listen to someone rebreak your baby-kid's bones?! That would be terrible!
I so love Captain :D is he like a sarcastic harry? :P
Author's Response: More like an honest Harry. :)
| Title: Friend or Foe?
| 09 Jul 2010 10:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Ray22 (Anonymous)
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Love The chapter!
Can't wait for the next!
What's it gonna be about?
Is everyone going to turn against Dumbledore?
I like how you had Poppy handle hte exam as wel as her consideration of Severus' sensibilities. I can just see Captain in his new eyeglasses :)
I really loved the way that Harry defended Severus to Dumbledore and hated the way Dumbledore was talking about Sev. Thank goodness Lily was there to explain things to Harry. I admit that I was afraid that Dumbledore had put something hidden in the adoption papers that would cause problems later on. It's the sort of thing he would do, I think, given the way that you have his personality written.
Well done!
| Title: Friend or Foe?
| 09 Jul 2010 6:08 am
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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More please! These bite-sized chapters are very good but just not long enough. :-)
Author's Response: On the plus side, their short lengths mean that I can update faster. :)
awww.
I definitely want to read onward.
Author's Response: Me too. :P
| Title: Friend or Foe?
| 08 Jul 2010 11:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Wonderful, I love baby Harry stories and the introduction of Captain as his connection with the world is well done. I especially love little Harry's unwavering faith in his "tall man." Well done!
I love protective Snape, thank you for a great story!
Awww that was sweet and sad all at the same time.
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