A potions prodigy - nice!
Title: Hold This Please
| 11 May 2011 12:33 am
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Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Dumbledore's sister is Ariana not Adriana.
Author's Response: AGH. I keep finding mistakes like that. Thanks for the heads up. At least I keep making different mistakes. *shrugs*
Full marks AND detention? How perfect. Yeah, the other Ravenclaws are going to raz him for that, all right. He didn't study well enough and had to have his potion saved by a child? Oh yeah!
Whittleby must feel rather foolish now. He was thoroughly shown up by a young child. Maybe in the future he will be more careful about how he treats those that are attempting to help him, even if he doesn't really want the help. I know that the other students are going to be watchful around Harry from now on, since they don't want the wrath of his father to come down upon them...xDD.
Title: Hold This Please
| 14 Aug 2010 5:16 am
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Reviewer: dragongirlg (Anonymous)
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What an adorable chapter!! I loved the interaction between Harry and Eric Whittleby - it was perfect! I can't wait to see what you do next with this story.
Title: Hold This Please
| 13 Aug 2010 11:33 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Not too fond of a prodigy but he was very sweet thank you
I like your Severus - this is a really great story, keep it up
Absolutely wonderful! As delightful as the tea and cookies, eh, BISCUITS Harry and his daddy enjoyed after that class. Good work!
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