COOL!!!!!!!!!! That was so sweet and cue and I LOVE snarky tiny Harry! I can't wait till your next update!
| Title: Hold This Please
| 12 Aug 2010 12:57 am
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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Love the story so far but I am not entirely sure how it suddenly jumped to little Harry being a potions genius and a rather bratty child at that too? Figuring out that the boy put the wrong number of roots in is perfectly sound, and advanced enough but the rest is stretching it quite a bit - third year potion, slicing and dicing, knowing which ingredient would help out i.e. reactions between them etc, etc, etc. Also he went from timid to quite assertive and downright rude really. The whole - you're stupid - deal was not cute.
Then having a child in a potions classroom is not something I'd see Severus, and this one too, doing as it's a very volatile environment, not to mention his son just jumping into a lesson like that is incredibly unprofessional. Anyway, still love the story but a little more realism is more to my liking.
Author's Response: Oh ye of little faith . . .
Hah! Harry is a little genius! He could be a little nicer ... but he's tiny, and look at his role model. And ... well ... he's kinda cute like that. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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