OOOOOO...I so want to punch that old man! His insinuations were disgusting and it would serve him right if Severus took Harry and left for good. I think that Severus should tell Minerva and Poppy what the old fart said. Surely they will give Dumbledork a piece of their minds for his insensitivity and cruelty.
| Title: Venturing Out
| 03 Jul 2010 11:07 pm
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| Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Loving this story. Harry is adorable, Captain brilliant, and Snape just about perfect with the child. Very entertaining so far
A very sweet chapter. The Tall Man is doing very well with his new charge.
My favorite chapter so far! It's great that Harry already understands that Snape is going to keep him safe.
I really love the teddy bear and Harry's conversations with him. I felt terrible for McGonagall when Harry reacted that way, and madder still at Dumbledore. Very interesting story.
Such a sweet scene between Snape and Harry! And Dumbledore being so clueless was maddening, I wanted to scream at him!
I really love how you brought Lily in to not only save Harry but to make those around him in his new environment understand her wishes, as well as let them know her dispeasure in their mistakes. Good chapter!
Harry is so cute! And I love how you portray Snape. Good story. I'm headed for more.
| Title: Freaks Aren't Allowed
| 03 Jul 2010 3:40 am
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| Reviewer: Taryn (Signed)
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Snape enveloping Harry in his robes is really entertaining to imagine. Especially because it reminds me of a batlike Snape, and his robes are his wings and...yeah. This is really adorable and sad so far and I can't wait to read the rest. It's not very clear to me how Harry got to Snape's house but that is probably because I wasn't paying attention or something. Also, does Snape not know who Harry is? WILL SOMETHING TERRIBLE HAPPEN WHEN HE FINDS OUT? Perhaps I'll find out if I continue reading.
Author's Response: Try re-reading the first chapter for you first question, and the second chapter for your second. :)
HAHA! I just love that HArry calls Snape HIS "Tall Man". XD It's so adorable! And Madam Pince does too! XD But I really do hope Severus does tell Harry his real name soon. I'm not sure he'd like little Harry telling all the students that the Potions Master was his Tall Man...even though that'd be cute. XD But now Dumbles wants to see Severus?? Oh no! I hope nothing bad happens! But I'll have to find out tomorrow when I get up. Awesome chappie lastcrazyhorn!! :D
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