Good start! I like it. I'm curious to see Severus raising a small badly broken child. I'm also looking forward to see what you will do with Dumbledore. I was a little surprise when he brought up his comment about Sev being like his father. Let's hope he doesn't cause too much trouble. Good job on the first five chapters!
Oh I think I like this story. Can't wait for it to continue.
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| 28 Jun 2010 8:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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*giggles* you just have to love a four year old Harry. God he's so cute! I can't wait to read more. You've filled me with great anticipation and your words made me picture everything clearly. LOVE IT!
Such an adorable story! All of your characters are written so well and the story flows really nicely. I can't wait for the rest!
aw Harry was so cute conversing with "Capt'n!" Can I please, please give Albus a certain cursed ring, enhanced to act faster? I'd AK, but that could be proven with my wand...unless...it was wandless...hmm...lol Good job!
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| 28 Jun 2010 3:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Sun (Anonymous)
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Thanks ,a very quick update!
Suggestions:
tiny boy,small child, cub, youngling,little imp (mischievous child ) etc...;)
Author's Response: The first two I've been using already, cub is more of a Remus thing, youngling reminds me far too much of Star Wars and Yoda (lol), but little imp . . . now you may have something there. Hmm. I shall ponder.
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| 28 Jun 2010 1:25 pm
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| Reviewer: hisluv (Anonymous)
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This is adorable, I love your Harry and Sev and can't help being intrigued as to where this is going, will we see more of Lily? Can't wait to read more and find out.
Kerry xxx
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| 28 Jun 2010 12:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Ash (Signed)
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I know it is early days, but I am really enjoying this one. Just found it last night and a new chappie too now. I love how you've written Minnie, as she's one of my favorite characters and am intrigued to see where you take Albus. Love Severus here, very protective, as I think he would be, also probably possessive towards his child later on and little Harry is just adorable. Anyway, thanks a lot!
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| 28 Jun 2010 9:08 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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| Title: Introductions
| 27 Jun 2010 4:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Sun (Anonymous)
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Hi!
very good story,please go on!
But you should find some synonyms of ''little boy'' or ''little Harry''...
Author's Response: I'll listen to any suggestions you might have.
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