Oh I love this I hope to see more soon!
| Title: Second Chance
| 12 Jul 2010 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love this especially the Alice quotation it is rather Mad Hatter but freat to see Severus as a fun 17 year old thank you
I loved that. It was just so clever and witty and funny.
Can't wait for more.
Oh, what a FUN read! I'm really looking forward to reading more. I can just picture HArry and the de-aged Sev and even better, hear them in my head as I read. This would make a great short film IMO. Bravo!
It's wonderful to see Severus so alive and happy. I hope that he will treasure this second chance. I can't wait to see what will happen next.
*applauds* Huzzah! ^^
I really enjoyed reading this. Perhaps, as you said, the characters are a bit OOC, but I think with Voldie gone they are more than entitled to a bit of silliness. Besides, they never did get to be just kids, after all. Also: 17-year-olds. Need I say more?
Brilliantly done - thanks for sharing!
love it! i love seeing both Harry and Sev being so carefree and able to just be teenagers! can't wait for more!
and i love the ''why a raven is like a writing desk!" bit! that's one of my favorite sayings in Alice in Wonderland!
~shannon
Oh , that's nice. Harry and Severus are friends, and Sev gets to live his live over again, and make better decisions hopefully, the second time around.
Nice story Bil. You always manage to put such an original twist to your stories.
I love the relationship you've crafted between younger Severus and Harry and your reasoning, that Severus doesn't want to go down the same path, makes a lot of sense. Very sweet and humourous fic.
What a cute and funny story :) Harry was quite hilarious, and it's nice to see Snape this way. Great job :D
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