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Title: Chapter 2 21 Jan 2013 4:44 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Why won't Harry take the potion? He must know it's not poison by now and he will die a lot sooner without it. I guess Harry can be annoyingly stubborn sometimes.
    Will Harry be excused from the tournament and if he isn't I feel like he's going to faint during one of the tasks.
Title: Chapter 2 23 Jul 2010 12:10 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no, this does sound really bad for Harry. (Foolish boy, skipping that potion!) But I can understand that he's in denial now; it's a normal step and almost anyone would hate to accept such terrible news.

    And now the Tournament is still going on, too. Poor kid has enough to deal with already without that. I wonder how you're going to work it all out.

    It sounds like Severus has his work cut out for him. Thankfully, he's a potions genius, so hopefully he can come up with an anti-dote in time.

    And kudos on using the word, "widdershins", lol. It's not a word that you come across too often.
Title: Chapter 2 20 Jul 2010 1:00 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting capter. M.

    Author's Response: Thank you.
Title: Chapter 2 12 Jul 2010 9:48 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, the plot thickens... Silly Harry not drinking his potion. I'm getting a bit worried about it (and eyeing those story warnings up there, hoping this isn't a death!fic).

    Author's Response:

    Our Harry is rather stubborn at times, isn't he?

    As for your concerns regarding the warnings... let's just say that none of those who've finished reading this fic have sent a lynch mob after me. ;) Not yet, anyway. ^^

Title: Chapter 2 10 Jul 2010 11:51 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Good portrayal of the character's reactions to Harry's poisoning; Harry's stubborn denial, Severus' determination to fix things and Dumbledore and Pomfrey's deep, yet restrained sadness all feel very in character. It's an interesting twist that you've set this before the Triwizard tournament and looks to be a useful plot device.
Title: Chapter 2 10 Jul 2010 2:42 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Harry!! How could you!

    Imagine him not taking the potion. I hope that Snape finds out quickly; I'm glad that Hermione is going to tell Madame Pomfrey.

    Great story, but I'm worried about Harry.
Title: Chapter 2 09 Jul 2010 8:44 pm
Reviewer: H20girl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow!
Title: Chapter 2 09 Jul 2010 7:14 pm
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry you little fool! Why does he ALWAYS fight when people are trying to help him? Yeah, nice one Potter, don't take the potion that's allowing you to LIVE!! And he didn't even hide it from Hermione. That's going to cost him. Big time. And then there's Snape when he find out and Poppy....that is if Snape doesn't kill him for putting his name in first. Oh, this is going to be bad! Harry's going to be sick and be in the contest! >_< Not good! Great work Dream! I'll read on later when I have more time! :D

    Author's Response:

    When doesn't he? LOL.

    Glad you're enjoying it so far. ^^

Title: Chapter 2 09 Jul 2010 5:50 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. Harry does not need this on top of everything. And wow he really didn't take his potion! He's going to be in trouble! GREAT story! Great development and characterization. I like the change form the fourth book.

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