I love that Snape is working so hard for Harry even though Harry is being irrational and not drinking the potions. I bet Severus takes him into his own rooms but I'm surprised that it would be Severus' idea rather than something forced upon him.
Well, at least Harry's out of the Tournament and I hope that having Harry collapse on him shook Ron out of his state.
But Harry definitely needs to start taking better care of himself. If he hadn't been in denial, he might have remembered that Severus said he would become weak and that's exactly what's happened without the daily dose of potion. I have a feeling that Severus is going to be keeping a closer eye on him from here on...and Hermione as well!
What a nice way out of the tourna ent! Bravo
Snape's trademark snarkiness is something of a relief. The telepathic, or whatever, exchange between Snape and Dumbledore at the beginning was slightly amusing.
Good chapter.
Interesting premise to get Harry out of the tournament (which, I guess, was, itself, a device to ush Ron into an arguement with Harry and, thus, reveal part of the truth to Harry's friends- very subtly done. A good chapter.
Oh, so Harry at least, doesn't have to compete in the Triwizard Tournament.
I guess that Ron feels like a real heel now, doesn't he?
I'm hoping that Severus will take personal care of Harry, and save his life.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 09 Jul 2010 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: H20girl (Anonymous)
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Awww. Nice scene at the end. I bet I know what Snape's idea is. :) Great story.
I bet Ron will be feeling guilty, especially if he hears that Harry's not supposed to be stressed out, but maybe it will help him become less of a git for most of this year. It's great that Harry got out of the Triwizard tournament though!
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