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Reviews For Perfectus Memoria
Title: Chapter 6 21 Jan 2013 5:20 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I am extremely surprised that Harry cares about what Severus eats already, maybe if we could see a bit more of his thought processes because I want to understand your version of Harry better. I would say that I hope Harry is alright but I have a feeling he will be.

    Author's Response:

    In general, I always regard Harry as kind-hearted. Unnaturally so, really, given his home life. Regarding the eating, Harry really is just subconsciously returning the favor of being looked after. He didn't really put much conscious thought into it.

    Thanks for the feedback so far - glad you're liking the tale! 

Title: Chapter 6 24 Jul 2010 12:57 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good to see Severus and Harry beginning to care for one another.

    Tense ending though...those types of reactions can be so scary!
Title: Chapter 6 20 Jul 2010 11:53 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snap!
Title: Chapter 6 12 Jul 2010 10:49 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that's so... Harry, you know, making sure that Snape remembers to eat? I do wonder, though, if his selflessness is more of a product of his upbringing or something inherent, like a thing Lily would've done. Either way, it was very touching.
Title: Chapter 6 10 Jul 2010 12:21 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very emotional chapter. I like the way in which you are subtly developing the characters, makeing Severus and Harry more open to the idea of friendship
Title: Chapter 6 10 Jul 2010 4:41 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!

    Poor Harry. Save him Snape!

    I love how Harry was concerned over whether Snape ate or not.

    Great story. Onto the next chappie.
Title: Chapter 6 09 Jul 2010 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Well I'm going to assume that he survives, but what an amazing last line!

    I'm glad that Harry is realizing these things. Maybe he will make up with Ron and Hermione now. Appreciate those around him and life a little bit more. Awesome story.
Title: Chapter 6 09 Jul 2010 8:47 pm
Reviewer: H20girl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well written, and posted complete!

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