I love that Draco doesn't seem to hate Harry even though he's jealous but I'm starting to get nervous about how long it will be for Harry to be cured, if he's cured. I so hope that you aren't going to kill Harry off. Thank you for another action filled chapter.
I liked how you brought Draco into the story and showed that the rivalry between the two isn't truly mean-spirited. I hope that Draco can be redeemed, or at least that his respect for Severus will keep him from joining Voldemort.
Harry had another close call! Well, more than one actually. Poor kid, seems like things are getting worse for him. Time may be running out. I hope Severus can come up with that anti-dote soon.
Haha. Pissed off DE! Nice touch! Thanks. M.
Oh, so the fake Moody's going to attempt to do... something? Good. Another plotline always makes for a more interesting read.
Very interesting character development with Draco, from the way you've written his interaction with Severus, I suspect he's going to be loyal to his godfather. Nice touch at the end of the chapter, with Moody attempting to kidnap Harry.
I'm so curious what spin you're putting on this story as compared to Canon. Very intriguing. You've really got me hooked to this story.
Ahh, so maybe Harry will be finding himself at the graveyard after all. Great development!
| Title: Chapter 12
| 09 Jul 2010 8:54 pm
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| Reviewer: H20girl (Anonymous)
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So it's just a matter of time now...
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