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Reviews For Perfectus Memoria
Title: Epilogue 21 Apr 2011 6:27 pm
Reviewer: dottylizard (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That's such a sweet scene at the end of chapter 14! No complaints here about the epilogue either.
    I must admit though that I had thought of Voldemort picking up the poison some time back, but hadn't thought of Snape thinking to give the 'wrong' potion; maybe I was worried about the speed of the adverse affects? And whether Snape would be harmed for giving the wrong potion...

    It's a great relief in some ways to come across a story which manages so realistically to get Harry out of the tournament; I know there's a few out there, and many where characters say that there was no way he should have competed etc, but this kind of situation seems to be rare.
    Only loose end that I can think of at the moment is the matter of catching Peter, and fixing the issue of Sirius' imprisonment and the guardianship of Harry. Not that it's relavant to this story as such. Foolproof story!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, very much! I do have a sequel in mind, so if I ever get to writing it, I'll be able to tie up those dangling ends that weren't immediately pertinent to this story.

    Thanks again for the wonderful review! ^^ ~D

Title: Epilogue 31 Mar 2011 10:25 am
Reviewer: multitaskmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved it. Thank you for writing and for sharing it. :)

    Author's Response: You're welcome. Thanks for the R&R.
Title: Epilogue 24 Jan 2011 4:46 am
Reviewer: Oakleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story with great plot and character. Well done on a great story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
Title: Epilogue 28 Jul 2010 6:25 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it! I was afraid at first it would be Harry that would die when I saw the "Character Death" warning, but when Harry ended up in the graveyard I knew it would be Voldemort. Good idea and great story!

    Author's Response:

    I decided not to kill Harry, though, when I started writing it was very much a possibility.

    Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the R&R! ^^

    ~D

Title: Epilogue 27 Jul 2010 6:25 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cute ending! I think Harry made a wise decision, but it is also the fact that he has a loving father figure now that gave him the security and perception to make it. I do hope he can someday have some good memories of James and Lily, but even if he doesn't , he does have a real family of his own now.

    Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it.

    Author's Response:

    I had this scene in mind since I decided that I wasn't going to kill Harry, after all (and yes, I very nearly decided to do so). You're correct about the reason Harry decided against using Perfectus Memoria - he's in a much better emotional state, now, than when he'd first tried to make it.

    As for the future... the Muse has proposed a sequel, actually, but there shall be no promises. 

    Anyhow, thank you so much for all the delightful reviews. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story, because I sure had a lot of fun writing it! ^^

    ~D

Title: Epilogue 23 Jul 2010 1:21 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a sweet story. Thank you, Mila

    Author's Response:
    You're welcome. Glad you liked it.
Title: Epilogue 17 Jul 2010 6:11 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved the take on this challenge. You write both Snape and Harry very well. Thanks for a great read!

    Author's Response: You're welcome! ^^ Glad you enjoyed it.
Title: Epilogue 15 Jul 2010 12:39 pm
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good story!!! Thanks for writing it!

    Author's Response: The pleasure was all mine. ^^
Title: Epilogue 13 Jul 2010 12:08 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for Great story and a wondeul AU of my least favourite book

    Author's Response: You're welcome. Glad you like it. ^^
Title: Epilogue 12 Jul 2010 12:09 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww

    *takes a deep breath*

    awwwww

    *finds a teddy-bear and squeezes it happily*

    What to say? Loved it? That doesn't begin to cover it. It's such a well-written and interesting story, with some lovely development between Snape and Harry. You've stayed true to Rowling's characters, her writing style, and yet there's something very unique about this story. Dunno. Maybe it is precisely because of that Snape-Harry aspect, but anyway, yeah, I've gone all teary-eyed and altogether insanely happy after reading this story.

    One word: beautiful.

    Thanks so much for writing this!

    Author's Response:

    You are most welcome. It was a pleasure to write - I'm glad you like it. ^^

    Thanks for the R&R.

    ~D


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