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Title: Chapter 14 22 Jan 2013 1:48 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That was amazing. I loved how you had Severus kill off Voldemort and how Severus implies that Harry will be living with him when they brew potions in the future.
Title: Chapter 13 22 Jan 2013 1:38 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad that Harry won't feel responsible for Cedric's death but I can't believe everyone has given up hope so easily. And why doesn't Dumbledore seem to care about the prophecy any longer?
Title: Chapter 12 22 Jan 2013 1:30 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Draco doesn't seem to hate Harry even though he's jealous but I'm starting to get nervous about how long it will be for Harry to be cured, if he's cured. I so hope that you aren't going to kill Harry off. Thank you for another action filled chapter.
Title: Chapter 11 21 Jan 2013 8:21 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I'm surprised that Ron didn't break down and that Hermione didn't start crying again. I'm glad that Severus told Harry that he cares and that their sort of friends but I hope Harry tells Severus the same soon.
Title: Chapter 10 21 Jan 2013 8:11 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that your Severus was never in denial and that he's just come out and admitted that he cares for Harry. I hope that Harry won't have any qualms with admitting how he feels too. I hope that we'll get to see a bit more of Harry's thought processes too.
Title: Chapter 9 21 Jan 2013 7:59 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Harry has come back to life and I hope Severus and Harry will have more time to connect soon.
Title: Chapter 8 21 Jan 2013 7:50 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    You stole my guess. I was thinking that maybe if Harry helped Severus out in his lab with potions, then maybe he would feel useful and like there is really a chance that his antagonist would work, but you thought of it first. Thank you for another chapter, I can't wait to see if Harry becomes more hopeful and less depressed in the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 7 21 Jan 2013 7:37 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how you have stuck by most of the events in the story such as Harry seeing the dragons and telling Cedric and Ron getting mad at Harry; but, you've made the story your own and it's fantastic.
Title: Chapter 6 21 Jan 2013 5:20 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I am extremely surprised that Harry cares about what Severus eats already, maybe if we could see a bit more of his thought processes because I want to understand your version of Harry better. I would say that I hope Harry is alright but I have a feeling he will be.

    Author's Response:

    In general, I always regard Harry as kind-hearted. Unnaturally so, really, given his home life. Regarding the eating, Harry really is just subconsciously returning the favor of being looked after. He didn't really put much conscious thought into it.

    Thanks for the feedback so far - glad you're liking the tale! 

Title: Chapter 5 21 Jan 2013 5:11 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I'm surprised at how kind or perhaps respectful they are being of each other. I really thought they would rip each other's throats out. And Severus came to the abusive relatives conclusion pretty fast but on such sound logic, I'm amazed you could get so far into his character so quickly. Thank you for this chapter, can't wait to see what else is coming.

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