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Reviews For Perfectus Memoria
Title: Chapter 4 21 Jan 2013 5:01 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I hadn't even considered that Harry would be in denial even though it would make a lot of sense. I was right about Severus taking Harry in. Yay! Thank you for this chapter, I wonder how everyone will react to Harry's news. I bet there will be apologies and tears involved.
Title: Chapter 3 21 Jan 2013 4:52 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Snape is working so hard for Harry even though Harry is being irrational and not drinking the potions. I bet Severus takes him into his own rooms but I'm surprised that it would be Severus' idea rather than something forced upon him.
Title: Chapter 2 21 Jan 2013 4:44 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Why won't Harry take the potion? He must know it's not poison by now and he will die a lot sooner without it. I guess Harry can be annoyingly stubborn sometimes.
    Will Harry be excused from the tournament and if he isn't I feel like he's going to faint during one of the tasks.
Title: Chapter 1 21 Jan 2013 4:33 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    wait, what exactly went wrong with the formula? Why didn't Harry want to tell his best friends about what he was doing?
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2012 12:39 pm
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed) [Report This]
    He's dying? What?!
    Great job though:)
Title: Epilogue 09 Dec 2011 11:15 am
Reviewer: Adriana Espan (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story! Sweet and nice! I love it.
Title: Epilogue 08 Aug 2011 11:46 am
Reviewer: Wandacarla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! The way you write, well I am exhausted because I just could not stop at the end of each chapter. I think this might be the first fic that I EVER read straight through, and that is a very big compliment coming from me. I can't wait to read you other stories. Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Why, thank you! Glad you enjoyed the tale. I will eventually get around to the sequel, maybe...

    Anyhow, thanks for the wonderful R&R. ^^

Title: Chapter 10 01 Aug 2011 2:20 pm
Reviewer: PersianPianist (Signed) [Report This]
    you know, if I had free access to Alan Rickman, I would ask him to play the last scene. I'm afraid this one time my imagination isn't sufficient. I want to SEE it!

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha, me, too!

    Thanks for the R&R. ^^

Title: Epilogue 16 Jul 2011 2:44 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Title: Epilogue 21 Apr 2011 6:27 pm
Reviewer: dottylizard (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That's such a sweet scene at the end of chapter 14! No complaints here about the epilogue either.
    I must admit though that I had thought of Voldemort picking up the poison some time back, but hadn't thought of Snape thinking to give the 'wrong' potion; maybe I was worried about the speed of the adverse affects? And whether Snape would be harmed for giving the wrong potion...

    It's a great relief in some ways to come across a story which manages so realistically to get Harry out of the tournament; I know there's a few out there, and many where characters say that there was no way he should have competed etc, but this kind of situation seems to be rare.
    Only loose end that I can think of at the moment is the matter of catching Peter, and fixing the issue of Sirius' imprisonment and the guardianship of Harry. Not that it's relavant to this story as such. Foolproof story!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, very much! I do have a sequel in mind, so if I ever get to writing it, I'll be able to tie up those dangling ends that weren't immediately pertinent to this story.

    Thanks again for the wonderful review! ^^ ~D


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