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Reviews For Perfectus Memoria
I did have to grin at Ron's and Hermione's exchange about the Yule Ball. Typical of those two, and it provided a little lightness in an otherwise solemn chapter. Of course Harry is depressed. Who wouldn't be? But it's good that Severus was able to distract him a bit and keep him busy. Harry needs to try not to dwell on unpleasant things. The truth is that none of us knows how long we're going to be here, and we all need to take each day as a gift. Great chapter again!
Thankfully they all are all right...at least I hope Harry's all right! Author's Response: I couldn't resist a confrontation with a dragon, really. It was a useful tool to help show how the poison was affecting Harry, despite his antagonist, and a way to imbue the tale with a small amount of action. Thanks for the R&R. ~D
Tense ending though...those types of reactions can be so scary!
Author's Response: Thank you. ^^ Hana was lots of fun to write. Also, I had Severus' quarters all mapped out, so it was easy to describe. Wish I'd come up for this floor plan for my other fic, though, as I really like it. Ta, again, ~D
Author's Response: You're welcome. Glad you liked it.
But Harry definitely needs to start taking better care of himself. If he hadn't been in denial, he might have remembered that Severus said he would become weak and that's exactly what's happened without the daily dose of potion. I have a feeling that Severus is going to be keeping a closer eye on him from here on...and Hermione as well!
And now the Tournament is still going on, too. Poor kid has enough to deal with already without that. I wonder how you're going to work it all out. It sounds like Severus has his work cut out for him. Thankfully, he's a potions genius, so hopefully he can come up with an anti-dote in time. And kudos on using the word, "widdershins", lol. It's not a word that you come across too often.
Great beginning! Author's Response: Thank you! ^^
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