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Reviews For Perfectus Memoria
Title: Chapter 1 12 Jul 2010 9:37 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    I know it's supposed to be dramatic and angsty and leave me unsettled and worried and all that... But after reading that last line, I began laughing like mad. Only Snape would say something like that. Congratulations, indeed. :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I am so glad I wasn't the only one who say the humor in that! ^^ I feel a mite less sadistic, now. LOL I rather thought it sounded like something Snape who say.

    Thanks for the R&R!

    ~D

Title: Epilogue 11 Jul 2010 1:01 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    In the end Harry did kill Voldemort in a way, didn't he? Funny how a potions accident led to the downfall of the late 'great' Dark lord. It's a good thing that they kept Harry's condition a secret, because if old Snakeface had known of it he might not have used Harry's blood.

    Author's Response:

    Indeed, that was my logic. I thought it a touch of poetic justice that Voldie's own arrogance was responsible for his second demise.

    Thanks for the R&R. 

    ~D

Title: Chapter 14 11 Jul 2010 3:33 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very clever twist. A wonderful, original story with great character interaction and development.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. ^^ And thanks for all the reviews!
Title: Chapter 13 11 Jul 2010 3:29 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a cliff-hanger. Great chapter.
Title: Chapter 12 11 Jul 2010 3:26 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting character development with Draco, from the way you've written his interaction with Severus, I suspect he's going to be loyal to his godfather. Nice touch at the end of the chapter, with Moody attempting to kidnap Harry.
Title: Epilogue 10 Jul 2010 8:05 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I wanted to review after I totally finished your story. Your story has prevented me from starting my house work today!!!! That is something. Loved the concept. You kept both in character but also brought them around where they respected and cared for each other in a very believeable fashion. Thank you for a great read.

    Author's Response:

    Glad it was able to hold your attention when pitted again the exciting wonder that is house work. LOL ^^

    Thanks for the R&R - glad you enjoyed it!

    ~D

Title: Epilogue 10 Jul 2010 5:26 pm
Reviewer: UltramarineQuest (Signed) [Report This]
    EXCELLENT WORK! Short and sweet. Merlin, I loved this one. Gr8, just gr8! I liked both Snape and Harry 'ere. Well done indeed!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Not sure I'd exactly call it short, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

    Thanks for the R&R.

    ~D

Title: Epilogue 10 Jul 2010 4:34 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I am so in awe of how perfectly wonderful this was and I am going to have to read it again (and likely again after that ^^) If only writing could come to us all as effortlessly as it seems to come to you; this really is gorgeously wonderful (and wonderfully gorgeous ^^)
    x

    Author's Response:

    *blushes ten shades of scarlet*

    Why, thank you! 

    I had a lot of fun writing this, but the truth is, it was less effortless than it seems. I had to nip and tuck and edit. There were times when I just stared at the screen for an inordinate stretch of time going, "Duuuuh... now when do I go? Hmmmm...." A few times, I think I literally banged my head against my desk in frustration because the characters and events wouldn't behave! 

    Anyhow, I'm going to stop blabbering, now. Thanks so much for the kind review! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. ^^

    ~D

Title: Chapter 11 10 Jul 2010 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry and his allergies! At least he's going to know all the rare ingredients to which he is allergic by the end of Snape's experiments. Great character interaction, I loved how you portrayed Hermione and Ron's reactions

    Author's Response:

    ^^ I always enjoy tormenting my characters at least a bit. Also, just having all the antidotes simply fail just seemed too easy, not to mention a bit dull.

    Thanks for the R&R - glad you're liking it.

    ~D

Title: Chapter 10 10 Jul 2010 12:44 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Really sweet ending to the chapter; I love how you're developing Harry and Severus' relationship. I also like how you portrayed Krum; it feels true to his canon personality, which is a nice change as many writers, somewhat unfairly, make him a villan.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I always thought of Krum as a pretty good guy, if a bit gruff. After all, the only time we saw him do anything villainous, he was under the Imperius curse.

     


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