Potions and Snitches
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Title: For Dumbledore 12 Jul 2010 12:17 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Eh, right. I don't think the introductory paragraphs telling - again - what we already know were... essential. Then again, perhaps it does give an insight as to what Harry's mindset at the moment is. Seems a bit unlike him, to be so vengeful, but then, I guess some of that pent-up grief and anger was bound to come out eventually.

    Author's Response:

    They probably weren't essential since we know everything that happened, but I just thought it'd be nice to have. Thanks for the review. :)

Title: For Dumbledore 12 Jul 2010 6:56 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh - a very great start. I like it, immensely. I must apologize ahead of time if I forget to leave reviews throughout... I, uh, tend to get a little absorbed...

    Love it, though. Can't wait to see where you went with this.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Dream Painter. It's fine if you don't leave reviews throughout. I definitely understand about getting absorbed into stories. :) Thanks for leaving a review.

Title: For Dumbledore 11 Jul 2010 8:13 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I understand Harry's rage, but sometimes things aren't what they seem. I hope that Harry won't do anything foolish.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Silverstar. :)
Title: For Dumbledore 11 Jul 2010 3:39 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very atmospheric, brooding first chapter; an interesting and realistic portrayal of Harry's feelings towards Severus

    Author's Response: I tried to make sure that we could all feel Harry's anger. Thanks for the review. :)
Title: For Dumbledore 11 Jul 2010 1:43 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry!

    I hope that he rethinks this foolish plan of his!

    Great start Lady.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora. :)

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