| Title: Violence Begets Violence
| 29 May 2013 10:37 pm
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| Reviewer: kelmore (Signed)
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groan... i think it was a mistake for snape to not put harry in his place. snape is extremly good and harry would have no choice but to listen if snape made harry.
Author's Response: Harry will find out soon enough. No worries. :) My thinking with why he didn't just lay into Harry is because he needed Harry to just get it all out so they could move on.
| Title: Violence Begets Violence
| 12 Jul 2010 12:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Harry's Invisibility Cloak cannot be summoned. But that's just me being nitpicky. Good chapter, despite all the violence. It did create that sort of oppressive mood of the world they're living it, the war and all, you know.
Author's Response: Nitpicky is good, but I don't know how to rewrite it any other way, though. Thanks. :)
Severus is playing a very dangerous game and it is Dumbledore's fault that he is forced to. I wonder if Dumbledore's portrait will talk to Harry? Will Harry look into the Penseive at the request of Severus?
I'm not surprised that Harry attempted the curse, though it does make me rather sad. This is all Dumbledore's fault. He shouldn't have made Severus swear a Wizard's Oath to kill him.
Author's Response: I'm horrible writing Dumbledore so that's a no. Thanks for the review. :)
| Title: Violence Begets Violence
| 11 Jul 2010 6:26 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, Harry must be wondering what's going on.
I feel so bad for Snape. I really hope that Harry gives him a chance.
Great chappie.
Author's Response: I know exactly how you feel, Pandora. I wanted to give Snape a big hug and apologize for making him suffer like this, but he gets a happy ending. Thanks. :)
| Title: Violence Begets Violence
| 11 Jul 2010 3:50 am
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
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