| Title: Death Walk
| 14 Jul 2010 12:57 am
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| Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Nice work. Hope to read more from you in the future.
Author's Response: thanks. Glad you liked it. im currently working on two stories which i hope to get posted sometime soon.
Nice. I'm sorry I missed this. I really like the sense of closure this story gives. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Im glad you liked it Tambra.
| Title: Death Walk
| 12 Jul 2010 9:29 pm
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| Reviewer: mr. fester (Anonymous)
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maintaining the tension between the two of them, shows that death is no barrier.
look forward to reading the next installment
Author's Response: thanks for the review andy! yea, it just wouldn't be right to leave out all the snarky~ness between the two!
Well done! Very plausible, I would say. Nicely written - great job for your first fic! ^^
Author's Response: THanks SO much! it was a lil nerve wracking because it was my first fic. im so glad you liked it!
If circumstance had been different, I think that Severus would have eventually have come to be on far friendlier terms with Harry. It's too bad that their understanding happened after Severus' death. I am glad that Severus was there to support Harry as he walked to his death at Voldemort's hands.
Author's Response: i agrre, that if Snape was to survive te war that him and Harry would've been Friendlier towards each other. i was going to add the others to this, but didn't for the fact that i wanted this to be like a finally "thank you" and "goodbye" between the two.
Awe... I loved it when Harry said that Snape shouldn't mock the Gryffindor Bravery. That part made me laugh. Your ending was very nice also. Great job. :)
Author's Response: LOL! i was listning to the Wizard Rock song "The Bravest Man I Ever Knew" and was trying to come up with a way to put that into this story, and i thought of that line because of all the times in canon that Snape Mocked the "Gryffindor Bravery".
Oh so lovely! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. i had fun writting it.
Aww! That was really good! Aww! That really pulled at the heart, you know? That was sad but really sweet. I liked all the snarking back and forth and all that. Great work snapeswidow!! :D
Author's Response: yea, it took me for ever to write this becaue i was cryingthe whole time! i love the Snarking betwen theses two in cannon, and no story would be complete with out it.
Lovely short story: I really enjoyed the antagonistic but (eventually) friendly dialogue between Harry and Severus and I thought it was very in character for Harry to want to thank Severus.
Author's Response: Thanks. that was the one thing I hated with Canon, that Sev died and Harry didn't get his chance to say thanks fotr always watching his back.
That was excellent. Poignant and bittersweet, and very much in charater.
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading! im glad you liked it!
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