Great story! I really enjoyed what you've written so far. It seems like there's a bit of a contraction, though, in the rules for your Room. If violence is not allowed, how is it that some of the people were less than willing to partake in the sexual activities? Is that not considered violence? Anyway, I really hope you continue the story, and I look forward to an update!
| Title: Chapter III: Lessons in Redrum (Part I)
| 07 Jan 2014 11:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Alice (Anonymous)
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This is the first time I ever read a story like this and I am so glad I gave it a try. Your characters are just fine and I am glad you are continuing this story. It really is a good start and I hope to see more in the future.
Keep up the good work!
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