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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 19 Jul 2010 3:35 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    THIS IS PRETTY AWESOME.

    Although there's some weirdness with how Snape said they were both eleven -- WAIT A SECOND. School got out a week ago, and so it's past first year, and so they're both eleven. Okay! I can do math! I apologize for that.

    Anyhow, this is pretty awesome, and I hope Snape will be all like "Blargh, children. Argh, I suppose I will play checkers with you." which means he will pretty much become their guardian.

    Uhm. Also, will Dudley's mum's death ever sink in? Or will he just throw tantrums and be awful and it'll never really be mentioned in the story? What about Harry? Did Petunia's death affect him at all?

    I CANNOT WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Actually I took a few liberties with their ages, or at least with Dudley's age. He should be twelve allready since his birthday is just before school lets out, but I wanted him to have his birthday with Snape (you'll see why later). I was kinda hoping no one would notice actually. :)

    I hope to keep Snape sneering as much as possible for as long as possible, but I do have a couple mushy scenes planned though they aren't for several chapters yet.

    As for Petunia's death, it will eventually sink in for Dudley but not for a few more chapters. Harry will be affected as well, but not to the same extent. Snape will even be...moved by her death to some extent.

    I will try to update soon.

    Thanks for an amazing review!

Title: Chapter 2 14 Jul 2010 9:01 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope he comes back and catches the brat before he can do TOOOO much damage to our Harry. Aparently he turns out be be an ok person eventually--based on chapter 1, so we will hope that Snape can use his massive deductive skills to figure out what is really going on with the 2 boys--and how they have been "trained" by Vernon.

    Looking forward to your next update.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    I do feel sorry for Harry, but...hurting him makes for a much better story. Snape will eventually figure out whats going on with his two boys, but it will take some time to fix the damage. Hopefully, for the readers it will be an interesting ride.

    Thanks for the great review!

Title: Chapter 2 14 Jul 2010 8:07 am
Reviewer: reader1writer1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very intriguing story. I look forward to more. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest as well!
Title: Chapter 2 14 Jul 2010 4:42 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like how Snape is dealing with Harry and Dudley. Great story.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :)
Title: Chapter 2 14 Jul 2010 3:10 am
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story! It's a really interesting concept and I haven't read anything like this before. I don't think Snape is going to put up with this bratty Dudley for much longer! It will be so funny to see how Snape reacts to having to take care of Harry and Dudely. Update Soon :D

    Author's Response:

    I wish I could say the idea was solely mine, but it was Foolish Wishmaker's. When I read her challenge this little story just popped into my head and wouldn't go away.

    And no Snape will not have much tolerance for Dudley's attitude. :)

    Thanks for the wonderful review!

Title: Chapter 2 14 Jul 2010 2:18 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful start to the story! can't wait to see more!

    I can't Believe that Snape would not only leave two 12 yr.olds home along, but THESE TWO 12year olds! That's almost as worse as leaving Harry and Draco alone in an empty house together!LOL my, my, is Snape in for a rude awakening when he gets back!

    please update soon! I wanna see if these two nearly kill each other( that sounded WAY to morrbid, didn't it!LOL) and how Snape handles their old anomosity toward each other.

    ~shannon

    Author's Response:

    lol. Well, in Snape's defense he doesn't quite understand the animosity between the two yet. Not to mention it makes for some great moments.

    As for them nearly killing each other, well...you'll just have to wait and see. :)

    Thanks for the great review!

Title: Chapter 2 13 Jul 2010 11:21 pm
Reviewer: MiuBlaze (Signed) [Report This]
    I just utterly love this...honestly, I do. (Yes, I am incapable of giving constructive critism)

    Author's Response:

    lol. Sometimes praise pure and simple is nice too. :)

    Thank you for a lovely review!

Title: Chapter 2 13 Jul 2010 9:37 pm
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope Sev "explains" to Dudley he is not allowed to hurt harry. As for the complaints, it was vague, but it was obvious, who couldn't see that, no pictures of them together until they were twelve, that had to be harry and dudley. I'm sure many readers understood that. Thanks for the quick update.

    Author's Response:

    I have many plans for Severus and Dudley...hehehe.

    Thanks for the great review!

Title: Chapter 2 13 Jul 2010 9:10 pm
Reviewer: silverforest4 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the second chapter. I did not think the first chapter was vague... It had Harry, Dudley and Snape...'aswell as Harry's kids which I believe are James Sirius, Lilly Luna and Albus Severus. Plus the two women they married, who the women are is interesting and keeps me guessing ( which I like)
    Can't wait for more... I'm hooked.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I've gotten some mixed reviews for the first chapter, but people seem to be enjoying the second chapter. As for who the women are you're going to have to keep guessing for awhile ;).

    Thank you for a wonderful review!

Title: Chapter 2 13 Jul 2010 8:08 pm
Reviewer: laraq (Signed) [Report This]
    I just finished reading the first 2 chapters and look forward to seeing how Snape 'whips' Dudley into shape after the shameful spoiling he has had for the first 12 years of his life.

    I didn't see the 'vagueness' of the first chapter as a negative. Instead it, successfully, created interest in reading more as I wanted to know who the "Daddy" referred to was (obviously NOT Harry) and who the 2 couples alluded to where and how they came to be. As well as finding out more about the kids.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. That sort of 'vagueness' was exactly what I was trying to portray. Apparently based on other reviews I've received I was not as sucessful as I meant to be.

    As for Snape and Dudley...well you'll just have to wait and see, but I assure you he is in for a huge shock.

    Thanks for your wonderful reveiw!


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