Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 08 Aug 2010 3:08 pm
Reviewer: honourary_weasley (Signed) [Report This]
    Dudley is going to be in for a world of hurt he never knew existed... and about time, too! I bet he's never had a time-out in his life...

    Good stuff!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the great review! I apologize for not responding sooner.

    I do feel kinda bad for Dudley going from over indulging parents to Snape. 

    The next chapter is now posted

Title: Chapter 3 22 Jul 2010 7:03 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    SNAPE WILL TURN HIM INTO A NEWT. Like he does with all the horrible children. I am typing this on a mobile and there is a cat on me; I will say something more useful later besides;

    GOSH DARN I LIKE THIS STORY.

    Author's Response:

    LOL. What a great review! I can't stop laughing. I must be even more tired then I thought! Please pet the kitty for me and I'm glad you like the story.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 3 22 Jul 2010 2:43 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Dudley is just a product of bad parenting.

    Author's Response:

    Without a doubt. Hopefully Snape will be able to counteract some of that.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 3 21 Jul 2010 10:22 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Love the development. I wonder how Dudley will develop, how long it will take him to change and see things differently, if he ever will at all.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    I'm always concerned with the development of my stories. The problem is despite how concerned I am, they seem to move faster then I intend. I really don't like stories that have Snape suddenly become a good guy overnight yet I often find that happening in my own stories. I'm trying really, really, hard not to let that happen in this one.

    Thanks for a great review!

Title: Chapter 3 21 Jul 2010 8:39 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I know what I hope snape will do to dudley, he is a bully! Nice writing!

    Author's Response:

    Dudley is a bully and Snape doesn't seem tolerate them very well. I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint.

    Thanks for a wonderful review!

Title: Chapter 3 21 Jul 2010 5:14 am
Reviewer: Ray22 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the story!
    I have no idea what Snape will do to Dudley,but if Snape's giving the punishment it can't be good.
    Please continue!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    I almost feel bad for Dudley. Almost. He is however a bully, and doubtless, will deserve what Snape dishes out.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 3 21 Jul 2010 3:37 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! I hope that Snape doesn't hurt Dudley; the boy doesn't know any better. He needs to learn how to behave differently.

    Great chappie. I 'm glad that Snape is wise to Harry's abuse.

    Author's Response:

    Snape still has much to discover about how Harry was treated. He's in for a real eye-opener in the next few chapters.

    As for Dudley...I'm sure he'll think Snape's punishment is far worse than a beating even if Snape doesn't raise a hand to him. Hopefully Snape will be able to correct some of the bad parenting Dudley suffers from and help him become a responsible adult.

    Thanks for the wonderful reivew!

Title: Chapter 3 21 Jul 2010 1:50 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    oh Dudley is in major dog doodie as he should be. Good chapter and I look foward to more! :-D

    Author's Response:

    Dudley is definiatly in trouble. You'll have to wait till the next chapter to see just how much.

    Thanks for the great review!

Title: Chapter 3 21 Jul 2010 1:08 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice interesting start to the story. Snape is just what Dudley needs, but it looks like there will be plenty of trouble along the way. Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Trouble?! Not for our boys!

    lol. What would be the fun if there was not trouble for them to get into.

    Thanks for the great review!


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