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Reviews For Caring for Yin and Yang
Can't wait for more... I'm hooked. Author's Response: Thank you! I've gotten some mixed reviews for the first chapter, but people seem to be enjoying the second chapter. As for who the women are you're going to have to keep guessing for awhile ;). Thank you for a wonderful review!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to keep it vague, because I wanted to make people curious so they would keep reading. Thanks for the review!
I didn't see the 'vagueness' of the first chapter as a negative. Instead it, successfully, created interest in reading more as I wanted to know who the "Daddy" referred to was (obviously NOT Harry) and who the 2 couples alluded to where and how they came to be. As well as finding out more about the kids. Author's Response: Thank you so much. That sort of 'vagueness' was exactly what I was trying to portray. Apparently based on other reviews I've received I was not as sucessful as I meant to be. As for Snape and Dudley...well you'll just have to wait and see, but I assure you he is in for a huge shock. Thanks for your wonderful reveiw!
Author's Response: You are not alone with not like the first chapter apparently. I meant for it to be a little vague and keep people guessing and get them interested, but apparently it backfired. I'm glad you like chapter 2 though. And Dudley is in for a shock, though that won't put him on the strait and narrow right away either. Thank you for the great feedback!
I hope you'll update this soon, so I can begin to understand what's going on^^ Author's Response: I"m sorry I confused you. The next chapter is up so hopefully that will explain things a little bit more. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm glad someone didn't think I was being to vague with the first chapter. I always picture Snape being like a big cuddle tedd.y bear to his grandkids and that image seemed like a good way to introduce the story. I don't plan on spending much time on the Dursley's punishment, hopefully people's imagination will take care of the rest. Thanks for your great review!
Wonder who Dudley married... Did Harry marry Ginny? Or maybe Hermione... I am secretly a Harry/hermione fan. One thing I love I mean LOVE is Snape as a grandfather :) So cute when he called them little ones... What's he look like? I hope he has grey hair or some grey hair... I think Snape with grey hair would be sexy. Update soon, can't wait to read more. Author's Response: I'm glad you like my stories, I kinda feel guilty posting this one without finishing BF&P but the idea wouldn't go away and I wanted some feedback for it. Unfortunantly you won't be seeing much of grandpa Sev, he's only going to appear in a couple more chapters. As for who Harry is married too....you'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for your wonderful review!
Author's Response: Yep, Snape is the grandpa. He's only going to be the grandfather in a couple of chapters, most of the story will be about how he became a grandpa. Thanks for your review! |
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