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Title: Chapter 2 13 Jul 2010 9:10 pm
Reviewer: silverforest4 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the second chapter. I did not think the first chapter was vague... It had Harry, Dudley and Snape...'aswell as Harry's kids which I believe are James Sirius, Lilly Luna and Albus Severus. Plus the two women they married, who the women are is interesting and keeps me guessing ( which I like)
    Can't wait for more... I'm hooked.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I've gotten some mixed reviews for the first chapter, but people seem to be enjoying the second chapter. As for who the women are you're going to have to keep guessing for awhile ;).

    Thank you for a wonderful review!

Title: Chapter 1 13 Jul 2010 8:42 pm
Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the chapter is a little to vague as to who the children are except for the "dark haired four-year-old boy". That is definitely Al Potter. Other than that its a good start. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I was trying to keep it vague, because I wanted to make people curious so they would keep reading.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 2 13 Jul 2010 8:08 pm
Reviewer: laraq (Signed) [Report This]
    I just finished reading the first 2 chapters and look forward to seeing how Snape 'whips' Dudley into shape after the shameful spoiling he has had for the first 12 years of his life.

    I didn't see the 'vagueness' of the first chapter as a negative. Instead it, successfully, created interest in reading more as I wanted to know who the "Daddy" referred to was (obviously NOT Harry) and who the 2 couples alluded to where and how they came to be. As well as finding out more about the kids.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. That sort of 'vagueness' was exactly what I was trying to portray. Apparently based on other reviews I've received I was not as sucessful as I meant to be.

    As for Snape and Dudley...well you'll just have to wait and see, but I assure you he is in for a huge shock.

    Thanks for your wonderful reveiw!

Title: Chapter 2 13 Jul 2010 6:51 pm
Reviewer: Shattered (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm not a huge fan of the first chapter. It just doesn't seem to let the story flow right. I was confused as to who was even talking most of the time. But I do like Chapter 2. I almost wish Dudley would be able to hit Harry a little and leave a bruise for the Professor to find when he returns. I do hope Dudley learns manners/respect eventually, but he shouldn't change overnight either. He is afterall a product of his environment where he was encouraged to beat on Harry. I think it would be best for the Professor to find out about that as soon as possible so he can start to work on it with Dudley.

    Author's Response:

    You are not alone with not like the first chapter apparently. I meant for it to be a little vague and keep people guessing and get them interested, but apparently it backfired. I'm glad you like chapter 2 though. And Dudley is in for a shock, though that won't put him on the strait and narrow right away either.

    Thank you for the great feedback!

Title: Chapter 1 13 Jul 2010 12:54 pm
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) [Report This]
    Now you've got me almost totally confused... No... scratch the almost :)
    I hope you'll update this soon, so I can begin to understand what's going on^^

    Author's Response:

    I"m sorry I confused you. The next chapter is up so hopefully that will explain things a little bit more.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 1 13 Jul 2010 9:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What an interesting chapter, no I don't think they were too vague, anyone who knows Harry Potter can see who is who. Kids always ask embarrasing questions, but good questions, and remember if you forget the past, you are doomed to repeat it. The Dursleys better get in trouble for what they did to the two boys.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad someone didn't think I was being to vague with the first chapter.

    I always picture Snape being like a big cuddle tedd.y bear to his grandkids and that image seemed like a good way to introduce the story.

    I don't plan on spending much time on the Dursley's punishment, hopefully people's imagination will take care of the rest.

    Thanks for your great review!

Title: Chapter 1 13 Jul 2010 6:31 am
Reviewer: silverforest4 (Signed) [Report This]
    oMG i love your fics and was so happy to see a new one. I love this fic already, Harry, Dudley and Snape ( as big daddy) is such a neat idea.
    Wonder who Dudley married... Did Harry marry Ginny? Or maybe Hermione... I am secretly a Harry/hermione fan.
    One thing I love I mean LOVE is Snape as a grandfather :)
    So cute when he called them little ones... What's he look like? I hope he has grey hair or some grey hair... I think Snape with grey hair would be sexy.
    Update soon, can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like my stories, I kinda feel guilty posting this one without finishing BF&P but the idea wouldn't go away and I wanted some feedback for it.

    Unfortunantly you won't be seeing much of grandpa Sev, he's only going to appear in a couple more chapters. As for who Harry is married too....you'll just have to wait and see.

    Thanks for your wonderful review!

Title: Chapter 1 13 Jul 2010 5:35 am
Reviewer: MiuBlaze (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, let's see....I'm guessing that Snape is the gramps. I'm luffing this first chappy!

    Author's Response:

    Yep, Snape is the grandpa. He's only going to be the grandfather in a couple of chapters, most of the story will be about how he became a grandpa.

    Thanks for your review!


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