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Reviews For Pen Pals
Title: Pen Pals 14 Jul 2010 4:46 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely done!

    I love how it all started with Snape trying to decide which house Harry should have been in and ended with him still not decided! Positively brilliant. Love how you crafted this tale. Bravo.
Title: Pen Pals 14 Jul 2010 2:27 am
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. I think this was a really interesting challenge. I like how Snape began to care for Harry, and in the beginning he used his spying skills to sneak into the common room. Awesome ^_^
Title: Pen Pals 14 Jul 2010 1:53 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    DAmn those Dursely's! evry time i read a story with them abusing harry, i just wanna AK the lot of them!

    Im glad that Severus got there in time for Harry, and that Harry now has him looking out for him.
Title: Pen Pals 14 Jul 2010 12:53 am
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very good. A nicely unusual way for Snape to find out Harry's situation, and I really liked how the story was told from Snape's point of view, and gave us plenty of background to his character.Had to smile at his accident with his potion experiment too!
Title: Pen Pals 14 Jul 2010 12:38 am
Reviewer: Ray22 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    HaHa!
    Love the story!
    Love the ending!
    "Merlin's Pants" *Snicker*
Title: Pen Pals 13 Jul 2010 9:55 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it. Very nice story. Great idea to have Snape want to try to figure him out. Worked out beautifully. I hope you change your mind about that nasty little "The End" thing.
Title: Pen Pals 13 Jul 2010 8:27 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant story.

    I'm so glad that Severus was so sneaky and being a Slytherin, figured it all out.

    Hee hee. I wonder what Severus would have said if he'd known that Harry was almost sorted in "his" house!

    I wonder who Harry went to instead of the Dursleys.

    You know...a sequel would be lovely! :)
Title: Pen Pals 13 Jul 2010 8:22 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful story! It's beautifully written and I love how you've portrayed Severus. He is a sly one, but thank goodness that it led to him discovering that Harry was abused and to helping him. Hopefully it can be the beginning of a better relationship for them.

    Lovely job!
Title: Pen Pals 13 Jul 2010 8:07 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    I adore this.

    This is exactly the way Snape would come to terms with Harry, slowly, with research and investigation, espionage, and Slytherin sneakiness.

    Loved the last line too.

    Glad that Dumbledore didn't know about the abuse. It often bothers me to read evil!Dumbles... it seems things are more complex than that. Glad you didn't take the easy way out.

    K
Title: Pen Pals 13 Jul 2010 7:37 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting, original plot with good character development and interaction. I particularly liked the dynamic between Minerva and Severus.

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