Interesting! I don't normally care for swearing and cursing in the stories I read, but I can understand why it's necessary here in Harry's characterization. This Harry has a long way to go in being "civilized", but it's neat to see Severus dealing with him.
How has Mr. Filch reacted to this "potty-mouthed" Potter? Your description of Severus' evaluation of Dumbledore's reaction to Harry was priceless!
Please give us a new chapter soon! Well done!
I hope you do continue this tale.
So gorgeously funny and fascinating - couldnt stop from laughing at '"what with playing 'chicken' with the Whomping Willow..."- that's just brilliant, I REALLY want to see a fic dedicated to that sometime... the mental image is just too much... especially if it includes Sevs face when he finds out ^^, that alone is seriously tempting me from my writers block ^^
I hope you do continue - I know its not always easy if no long term plot comes to mind but I think anything more of this will be equally as fantastic because its such a unique take on a budding relationship between snape and harry. Good luck ^^
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| 05 Dec 2010 2:22 am
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Awesome :o) I loved the first chapter when you put it up, can't wait to see how a street rat style Harry takes on Hogwarts =D
Wonderful.
This is a really interesting & different Harry. I'm surprised Snape hasn't come up with a spell to make Harry watch his language. (Not that it bothers me, I sometimes curse like a sailor too. Inherited from my mother) ;D
Please continue
Really enjoyed these two chapters, hope you continue updating
| Title: The sorting
| 04 Dec 2010 2:46 am
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| Reviewer: anon37 (Anonymous)
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Glad you decided to continue this, it's really interesting! I like defiant, pissed-off Harry. Made me think about why the hat would've chosen Gryffindor without Harry sitting there muttering "Not Slytherin"... I know, this is a different Harry who's learned different lessons about bravery than life at the Dursley's would've taught, and come to think of it, an 11 -year-old would have to be pretty brave to swear at Severus 3 times and try to shoplift rigth under his nose... I hope you'll continue this story, it's interesting and fun!
LOL that's was really good. :) and nearly fluffy there at the end.
I love the idea that Albus is having to pay such an obvious price...sadly so is Harry. I hope the other Gryffindors forgive his outburst.
Yeah, love this. I'd love to see Ron and Hermione's reaction to this Harry.
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| 04 Dec 2010 1:11 am
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| Reviewer: Minato (Anonymous)
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