Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

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Title: Chapter 1 20 Nov 2021 10:52 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m hooked.
Title: Chapter 1 13 Feb 2016 6:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved Harry swearing at Severus absolutely hilarious!
Title: Chapter 1 11 May 2014 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely story
Title: Chapter 1 07 Apr 2014 9:56 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is awesome too! I really like how you use humor to bring out the best from the characters. Harry as a street urchin is just great! So much better to interact with Severus - too bad JKR didn't think of this...totally could even be a better story.
Title: Chapter 1 08 Dec 2010 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved Harry and how Severus deals with him thank you
Title: Chapter 1 20 Jul 2010 11:45 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting story! I like Harry swearing at Snape, hahah :D Good job :)
Title: Chapter 1 19 Jul 2010 8:40 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay great start! Love this situation, great premise!
Title: Chapter 1 19 Jul 2010 5:41 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    haha, I like this story! It would be cool if you continued it, I like street savvy Harry. Formatting got wanky towards the end, just so you know.
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jul 2010 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Ophelia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No! I want to read more! ^.^ The way you wrote Harry is very interesting and diffrent from how others protray him, including OOC portrails!
    As it is, I'm wondering what house this Harry will be sorted in. ^.^ And his interactions with Ron & the others! I really want to read more! XD
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jul 2010 2:26 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really great read! I love this version of Harry - very interesting. I hope you continue!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I might continue this when I've got a little further with the main story I'm writing... :) 

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