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Title: The sorting 04 Dec 2010 2:46 am
Reviewer: anon37 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad you decided to continue this, it's really interesting! I like defiant, pissed-off Harry. Made me think about why the hat would've chosen Gryffindor without Harry sitting there muttering "Not Slytherin"... I know, this is a different Harry who's learned different lessons about bravery than life at the Dursley's would've taught, and come to think of it, an 11 -year-old would have to be pretty brave to swear at Severus 3 times and try to shoplift rigth under his nose... I hope you'll continue this story, it's interesting and fun!
Title: The sorting 04 Dec 2010 2:09 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL that's was really good. :) and nearly fluffy there at the end.

    I love the idea that Albus is having to pay such an obvious price...sadly so is Harry. I hope the other Gryffindors forgive his outburst.
Title: The sorting 04 Dec 2010 1:41 am
Reviewer: myscus (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, love this. I'd love to see Ron and Hermione's reaction to this Harry.
Title: The sorting 04 Dec 2010 1:11 am
Reviewer: Minato (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story! More plz!
Title: Chapter 1 20 Jul 2010 11:45 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting story! I like Harry swearing at Snape, hahah :D Good job :)
Title: Chapter 1 19 Jul 2010 8:40 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay great start! Love this situation, great premise!
Title: Chapter 1 19 Jul 2010 5:41 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    haha, I like this story! It would be cool if you continued it, I like street savvy Harry. Formatting got wanky towards the end, just so you know.
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jul 2010 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Ophelia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No! I want to read more! ^.^ The way you wrote Harry is very interesting and diffrent from how others protray him, including OOC portrails!
    As it is, I'm wondering what house this Harry will be sorted in. ^.^ And his interactions with Ron & the others! I really want to read more! XD
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jul 2010 2:26 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really great read! I love this version of Harry - very interesting. I hope you continue!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I might continue this when I've got a little further with the main story I'm writing... :) 
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jul 2010 12:34 am
Reviewer: Kezza (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it. Please keep writing

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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