Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

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Title: Chapter 1 17 Jul 2010 1:07 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your tough little Harry, Very easy to imagine (and I laughed when he 'greeted' Snape - so perfect ^^)
    Would prove interesting to see where this went, I think he'd be incredibly complex and hard to deal with for anyone (but I'm sure Sev would do his level best).

    Author's Response: Yeah the greeting was the main idea that sparked this for me :) Yeah, Severus would be able to 'get' what he's thinking to some extent, given some similarities in their upbringings... Cheers for reviewing
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jul 2010 8:51 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    More, please? :D

    Author's Response: Maybe... Seeing as people are asking so nicely!!
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jul 2010 12:29 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    I can see him in Slytherin already.
    He's gonna end up an outcast almost from the start of school.

    Author's Response:

    Lol, seeing that he curses when he feels insecure can you imagine his first conversation with a bunch of posh Slytherins?!

Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 5:35 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 5:01 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Wait, wait, what do you mean a one-shot? There is going to be another chapter, is it not? Insolent Harry is fun to read .) m.

    Author's Response: Hmm maybe, I might continue this when I've got a little further with the main story I'm writing... I didn't plan to write this at all, it just kind of happened, so I'll see if I can fit some more in. Thanks for reviewing :)
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 4:35 pm
Reviewer: kazza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. Oh but I do like your sense of humour... "Are you a mug too?" was one of my favourite lines in a wonderful collection of one-liners. Love it!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I always feel that I can't write funny bits so your review made me very pleased :)
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 9:59 am
Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting start. I think Dumbledore isn't going to be too happy with how Harry is. Definitely would bring up bad memories of a certain dark wizard...

    Author's Response: Maybe... he's not *that* bad though. He steals - but that's a phase a lot of kids go through. The fighting is supposed to show him having learnt to stick up for himself against bullies, he hasn't set out to *hurt* anyone as such...
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 9:55 am
Reviewer: Shader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hah! I watched To Sir, With Love just the other day and this reminds me of that movie. Great concept, can't wait to see it fleshed out.

    Author's Response: I haven't seen that film, I'll have to try and watch it sometime! Thanks for reviewing :)
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 8:42 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting I would love to see more...

    Author's Response:  Glad you liked it. I might continue this when I've got a little further with the main story I'm writing... :) 
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 7:14 am
Reviewer: AllyKat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You can't keep this as a one-shot!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I might continue this when I've got a little further with the main story I'm writing... :) 

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