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Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 3:01 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, I loved that! Especially at the end there where you sorta get a glimpse that as tough as he acts, Harry doesn't feel quite so all the time.

    His accent was cute too. :-)

    Good work! :D

    Author's Response: Cheers! Yeah he kind of uses his attitude to cover up insecurities so he's not nearly as tough as he thinks he is! :)
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 2:41 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good first chapter. It's unusual and well written. I like the overall idea of Harry, not abused, but just growing up in an orphanage with some rough kids and some neglect. And Snape isn't running in to rescue Harry. Hope you keep going with this.

    Author's Response: Yeah he's definately neglected rather than abused and I figured that emotionally he'd probably be better off in the children's home than at the Dursleys... I might see if I can continue this when I've got a little further with the main story I'm writing... :) 
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 2:23 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You can't end it there!

    Author's Response: Well, maybe I'll continue this when I've got a little further with the main story I'm writing... :) I honestly didn't intend to start *another* fic but this kept bugging me until I wrote it.
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jul 2010 1:33 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, his bravado, and the underlying fragility, is beautifully portrayed. I love the Harry/Severus interaction.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I liked the idea of him cursing at Severus although he's not actually as tough as he makes out...
Title: Chapter 1 15 Jul 2010 11:16 pm
Reviewer: Turnosso (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it. It's not the usual 'Harry-abused, Snape comes to the rescue' type of story.
    And I positively adore Harry's attitude. Brilliantly written. Please continue!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I might continue this when I've got a little further with the main story I'm writing... :) 

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