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Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 22 Aug 2012 11:25 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Fascinating first chapter. I especially like the way you tied the history of Hogwarts into the history of the region. I'm looking forward to a good story here.
Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 19 Jul 2010 5:49 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    One of my most favorite things in the world to read is historical fiction. History itself has a certain... sanctity to it, in my mind (if that makes any sense). Loved this chapter - it is very plausible. I can't wait to see where you went with the rest of the story.

    Author's Response:

    I agree; I love historical fiction, which is why, in my own work, I tend to include 'flashbacks' where I can; it anchors the ficitonal events in reality and gives an additional semblance of reality. If you enjoy historical (or, rather, mock-historical) fiction, you might enjoy 'When the Boat Comes In' and 'Harry Potter and the Order of the Pegasus', other stories which strongly draw upon a semi-invented past. 

    I'm really glad that you enjoyed this chapter and thanks for the review. 

Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 18 Jul 2010 3:06 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the concept when I first read this. I can't wait to dig into the story and find out what's going to happen.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I hope you enjoy the rest of the plot :)
Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 17 Jul 2010 11:42 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful new story! I love this chapter and the way this man saved the students and prepared a way for new students to be safe. Great idea!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you liked the back-story although, admittedly, the idea of a "safe corridor" was Jan's, I just created a history behind it lol.
Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 17 Jul 2010 2:40 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh, I like this. Usually I'm not one to cheer when I see "the history of things", so to speak, but you've got me hooked. Very, very good first chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I've always loved history because, behind all the facts and dates, it's a story, involving real people who loved, lost, laughed and fought. Sometimes a flashback can be worth a thousand words of explaination.
Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 17 Jul 2010 3:05 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, a very intriguing beginning! I'm really liking it.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad so many people seem to like the first chapter; it's a bit gritty (I based it on the Medieval Miracle Plays) but I thought it would be interesting to start with a brief, fierce flash of history, lus it would mean that the reader knows about the Corridor when it appears later on in the story.
Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 16 Jul 2010 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    This is amazing Morgana! You've got me mesmerized by this story, and I'm learning some interesting historical facts as well.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying it. Historical fact really helped me in this chapter; although, of course, James I did not attack Hogwarts, had the school existed, it would have been entirely in character for him to do so. Thus, I was able to find a reason for Myrridin's martyrdom and anchor my original character in history, which I think helped him to feel more real.

Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 16 Jul 2010 7:04 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    This was intensive. Hard to read for a non-native speaker, but very interesting style. I liked the plot too! Mila

    Author's Response:

    Yes, the accents were rather hard to write and, I imagine, the alternate spellings would be quite difficult, sorry. I just had this clear image of Myrridin speaking with a strong, Scottish accent, the softer syllables adding another contrast to the hard, powerful man. 

Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 16 Jul 2010 5:51 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Sounds interesting so far, but I'm not sure if I like it or not. The whole idea of King James attacking Hogwarts... I just don't see it, although everything was described very nicely.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you found it interesting at least ^^. King James I was obsessed with Witchcraft and not in a good way. He attended the North Berwick Witch Trials, the first major persecution of witches since the Witchcraft Act, and wrote the Daemonology, a book opposing the practice of witchcraft. If the man had known of Hogwarts (a distinct possibility, considering the pressures under which muggleborns would be put to denounce their fellow mages), it is entirely probable that he would have attacked the castle. Also, I really needed a powerful reason for Myrridin to perform the rite and an attack on Hogwarts by the muggle army seemed an interesting plot device: JK Rowling, herself, says in 'The Tales of Beedle the Bard' that witch-hunters did, occasionally, kill witches and wizards, i.e. Nearly-Headless Nick, and that children were especially at risk. As most duelling spells work only on one person at a time, it doesn't take a genius to work out that, in a fight with twenty muggles to every wizard, Hogwarts could be wiped off the face of the earth. I really wanted to get a feeling of despair and urgency so that Myrridin's martyrdom was just that- a martyrdom. Thanks for the review.


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