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Title: Res, Non Verba 03 Dec 2011 11:02 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I believe this is my absolute favorite quote in all of FanFic.. “I may not be Lucius Malfoy, Harry, I may not have his land or his galleons or his ancestors but I’ve never licked the boots of no Dark Lord either. And I’ve earned all I’ve got through honest graft. So don’t yeh split hairs over what young Malfoy will say, y’hear.”

    Seriously, that was truly inspired and absolutely perfect.

    Of course, I also found Snape's suggestion to Harry to "punch Draco" wonderfully hilarious.

    I'm so glad this story popped up in the "Story of the Moment" spotlight.
Title: Res, Non Verba 24 Jul 2010 8:18 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how this story is shaping up. It seems quite natural that Snape and Harry would be at first grudging friends. I like it that Snape is now seeing Harry's resemblance to Lily as they spend more time together.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I thought it would be more natural that way- one cannot get over three years of mutual dislike in an hour, even if one wants to!
Title: Res, Non Verba 19 Jul 2010 9:29 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely. You have quite a talent with words, as well. So many great lines! My favorite for this chapter has to be:

    "The two ex-adversaries stared at each other, feeling rather like manticores trying to converse using a book of etiquette written by centaurs."

    Just brilliant!

    Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it :)
Title: Res, Non Verba 18 Jul 2010 9:30 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chappie. I'm really enjoying this newfound camaraderie between Snape and Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Title: Res, Non Verba 18 Jul 2010 3:54 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I liked how Hagrid made that speech and formally recognized Harry, as well as making the point that he had not entered the tournament and that the other students had behaved badly towards him. And thank goodness that Harry is out of that, though it'll be interesting to see how you'll have it play out with Voldemort.

    I do hope that Ron will come around before he loses Harry's friendship forever. This time period was definitely one of Ron's low points.

    And of course it would be confusing and stressful for Harry to not know what to expect from Severus now, or how he should react. I'm glad that they talked and got things straightened out. And I loved Severus instructing Harry to get detention by punching Malfoy, lol.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^. I thought that, although Hagrid seldom makes speeches, it would be very in character for him to publicly claim Harry as his son, not least because, after his childhood, having someone proudly announce him as a member of their family would do wonders for his self-esteem.

    I think Ron is rather similar, personality wise, to Percy; hyper-sensitivity when it comes to themselves and a surprising lack of perception for the feelings of others, combined with a liberal dose of bull-headedness, does not make a good combination. Luckily, Ron has other, more positive traits, which will stand him in good stead.

Title: Res, Non Verba 17 Jul 2010 4:03 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice

    Author's Response: Thanks :)
Title: Res, Non Verba 17 Jul 2010 12:51 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Moldywart -- gotta love it!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it would be rather in character for Harry to use such an impertinent nickname lol!
Title: Res, Non Verba 16 Jul 2010 8:14 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chappie.

    I'm so glad that Harry and Snape have reached a truce..

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy the story
Title: Res, Non Verba 16 Jul 2010 7:03 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Some lines in this chapter were confusing... when somebody grabbed Ron and dragged him outside... I had no idea where Harry was, what was happening... it was just awkward was all. He was thinking about life and then the next second somebody was there dragging Ron away, then McGonagall was there asking him inside her office... it would have been good to know where Harry was in the first place.

    Author's Response:

    Harry was in transfiguration class: "Having spent most of his Transfiguration class staring out of the window, Harry was not wholly surprised when, at the end of lesson, Professor McGonagall rather sharply asked him to stay behind". Hermione (the petite, bushy-haired witch), was dragging Ron outside because she was angry with him, thinking that their feud was the reason why Harry was distracted and, therefore, about to recieve a ticking off from McGonagall. I wanted to create the sence that Harry was stumbling through his school day with his head in the clouds and, therefore, I used subtle markers of events rather than heavily marking people and places. Unfortunately, it seems that this might have meant that the circumstances were not too clear. 


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