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Reviews For The White Laird of the Mountains
Seriously, that was truly inspired and absolutely perfect. Of course, I also found Snape's suggestion to Harry to "punch Draco" wonderfully hilarious. I'm so glad this story popped up in the "Story of the Moment" spotlight.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I thought it would be more natural that way- one cannot get over three years of mutual dislike in an hour, even if one wants to!
"The two ex-adversaries stared at each other, feeling rather like manticores trying to converse using a book of etiquette written by centaurs." Just brilliant! Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it :)
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
I do hope that Ron will come around before he loses Harry's friendship forever. This time period was definitely one of Ron's low points. And of course it would be confusing and stressful for Harry to not know what to expect from Severus now, or how he should react. I'm glad that they talked and got things straightened out. And I loved Severus instructing Harry to get detention by punching Malfoy, lol. Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I thought that, although Hagrid seldom makes speeches, it would be very in character for him to publicly claim Harry as his son, not least because, after his childhood, having someone proudly announce him as a member of their family would do wonders for his self-esteem.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it would be rather in character for Harry to use such an impertinent nickname lol!
I'm so glad that Harry and Snape have reached a truce.. Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy the story
Author's Response: Harry was in transfiguration class: "Having spent most of his Transfiguration class staring out of the window, Harry was not wholly surprised when, at the end of lesson, Professor McGonagall rather sharply asked him to stay behind". Hermione (the petite, bushy-haired witch), was dragging Ron outside because she was angry with him, thinking that their feud was the reason why Harry was distracted and, therefore, about to recieve a ticking off from McGonagall. I wanted to create the sence that Harry was stumbling through his school day with his head in the clouds and, therefore, I used subtle markers of events rather than heavily marking people and places. Unfortunately, it seems that this might have meant that the circumstances were not too clear. |
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