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Reviews For The White Laird of the Mountains
Is that a tip of your writer's plume to our wonderful, lost, lamented Colonel Brandon? '..could be found again, if sought?' I had to stop and read that paragraph out loud. Mr. A. S.P. Rickman. Febr. 21. 1946
I think Harry is a little hard on himself, but it is very in character for him to feel great remorse after hurting someone. I hope he can find Severus and the two of them make amends. Ah, Ron...well, he was certainly being an awful prat in the beginning, to even consider going to Rita Skeeter, but he doesn't deserve to be left to Voldemort's mercies! I hope Dumbledore and company can figure out how to save him. Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I knew that this particular plot device, Ron's decision to talk to Rita Skeeter, would be controversial, which is why I spent a good few paragraphs outlining his state of mind and also portrayed him as giving a long line of excuses; yes, Ron does know that what he's doing is wrong but he's hurt, angry and resentful. However, as you say, he doesn't deserve to be left with Voldemort.
Author's Response: Thanks. The Trophy Room is on the same floor as the Defence Professor's office ;)
Author's Response: Nope, Rita's just a amoral little muckraker lol! Thanks for the review
Poor Harry. This just keeps getting worse, doesn't it? Ron is such a prat though, isn't he? Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Ron is one of my favourite characters to write, almost a plot device in his own right; while brave, easy-going and affable, Ron generally doesn't see things from other people's perspectives- if someone does/says something that hurts him, they must be a bad person- and hell hath no stubborn, blind, vindictive fury like a Ron scorned! |
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