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Title: Una Salus Victus 18 Jul 2010 9:40 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Mmm, love the... conflict. I was tiny bit afraid Snape and Harry would settle into a routine and there'd be no more headbutting. Heh.

    Very good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I don't think Harry and Severus could ever settle into a routene devoid of headbutting lol! (If only because Severus is sarcastic and Harry is a teenage boy, one of the more thin-skinned of beings)
Title: Res, Non Verba 18 Jul 2010 9:30 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chappie. I'm really enjoying this newfound camaraderie between Snape and Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Title: Ex Tenebris Lux 18 Jul 2010 9:13 am
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Not sure if I like the idea of Hagrid as Harry's guardian, and though Rowling, if I'm not mistaken, said that Hagrid was supposed to be the father figure in Harry's life, I've always thought of him as a big brother to Harry. Aw, well. At least Harry won't have to return to the Dursleys.

    It was interesting to see Aberforth thrown into the mix, and the way you wrote his interaction with Snape, one would think they're... friends?

    Good chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. In the storyline, Severus (or, rather, I) needed a fast solution and, as Harry views McGonagall as more of a Great-Aunt figure, Albus has proved himself untrustworthy (in Snape's eyes) and Severus hasn't yet been able to repair his relationship with Harry (and, indeed, doesn't know whether it's possible) the candidates are reduced to four: Sirius, Hagrid, the Weasleys and Remus. Now, casting aside Severus' opinions of Black (who is, in some ways, even less mature and more dangerous than Hagrid (considering his daredevil attitude), Sirius is a man on the run and, therefore, would be hard pressed to create a secure location. Remus is a werewolf, nuff said, and the Weasleys, while being good parents, are not really able to provide an appropriate level of security and, besides, Ron is at varience with Harry. Hagrid, on the other hand, lives in Hogwarts (and could take a suite inside the castle during the holidays), is very strong, has a natural defence against curses and, most importantly, he loves Harry and Harry loves him. As for Aberforth and Severus, I've always thought that the two astute, no-nonsence men would probably have a grudging respect, if not a positive friendship, and I can see Severus letting off steam about his students (and employer) to Aberforth's sympathetic ear (after all, as a DE, he has to stay in character ;).

Title: Una Salus Victus 18 Jul 2010 4:03 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no! Just when things were going so well, too! It's certainly a bad situation. I do feel so sorry for Severus. He made a dreadful mistake, more than one actually, in choosing to follow Voldemort and in telling him the prophecy. But no one feels more anguish over his past than he does, and he has done everything possible to atone for it.

    But on the other hand, one can hardly blame Harry for being upset and angry. He has always grieved for his lost parents and everything that he has suffered, from being raised by the Dursleys to being targeted by Voldemort, stems from that prophecy. I can't help but think that Harry has a right to be upset, and that Dumbledore should also recognize that.

    But of course, I am really hoping that Harry and Severus can make amends and that Severus won't be lost in that corridor forever.

    Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks; it's a bit of a rollercoaster chapter, isn't it. I think the reason that Dumbledore was so stern was that, although he knew Harry had a right to be angry, he did not want Harry to take that anger out on Severus because striking someone's achilles heel tends to have disasterous results. (Of course, at this point, Dumbledore did not know that Harry had already verbally attacked Severus) I'm glad I managed to get over both sides of the story, however; I didn't want either character to be percieved as being in the wrong for the reasons you've mentioned

Title: Res, Non Verba 18 Jul 2010 3:54 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I liked how Hagrid made that speech and formally recognized Harry, as well as making the point that he had not entered the tournament and that the other students had behaved badly towards him. And thank goodness that Harry is out of that, though it'll be interesting to see how you'll have it play out with Voldemort.

    I do hope that Ron will come around before he loses Harry's friendship forever. This time period was definitely one of Ron's low points.

    And of course it would be confusing and stressful for Harry to not know what to expect from Severus now, or how he should react. I'm glad that they talked and got things straightened out. And I loved Severus instructing Harry to get detention by punching Malfoy, lol.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^. I thought that, although Hagrid seldom makes speeches, it would be very in character for him to publicly claim Harry as his son, not least because, after his childhood, having someone proudly announce him as a member of their family would do wonders for his self-esteem.

    I think Ron is rather similar, personality wise, to Percy; hyper-sensitivity when it comes to themselves and a surprising lack of perception for the feelings of others, combined with a liberal dose of bull-headedness, does not make a good combination. Luckily, Ron has other, more positive traits, which will stand him in good stead.

Title: Ex Tenebris Lux 18 Jul 2010 3:50 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, how original! I don't think I've ever read a story where Hagrid adopts Harry. I love it! I wonder if Hagrid is mature enough, but he definitely has a great heart and deeply loves Harry. And Harry has a pretty good head on his shoulders, so I'm sure they'll be just fine. And I like how you've shown a connection between Hagrid and Severus.

    Author's Response: Thanks :) The Severus/Hagrid connection was one of the reasons why I thought that the adoption would work; in the canon, Hagrid seems to respect Severus and, I imagine, would listen to the astute, clever man's advice. Combined with Aberforth's no-nonsence attitude and, as you say, the fact that Harry has a good head on his shoulders, Hagrid's mistakes will probably be minimal and, most importantly, he'll give Harry the all encompassing love and support he needs to flourish.  
Title: Sanctum Sanctorum 18 Jul 2010 3:06 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the concept when I first read this. I can't wait to dig into the story and find out what's going to happen.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I hope you enjoy the rest of the plot :)
Title: Ycan Upcyme Eadignesse 18 Jul 2010 12:30 am
Reviewer: fairylights (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this story, I loved the way you portrayed Severus, the complexity of his character and they way he showed he cared for Harry. Well done! Will there be more?

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm seriously considering writing a sequel now, considering how well this universe has been recieved, but I'm going to need a little time to think up a plot, not to mention making some serious headway on two stories which have been on the backburner for too long. Oh, and a sequel to When The Boat Comes In. And couple of fic-ideas which haven't even been started yet. //drowns in ink//
Title: Ex Tenebris Lux 18 Jul 2010 12:21 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Hagrid! I love Hagrid. I've always wanted to do a story in which he adopts Harry. Great idea!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I adore Hagrid too and I though that, seeing that this story is rather gritty, a little fluff wouldn't go amiss. Besides, Hagrid and Severus would make a good team; Hagrid resects Severus and would (probably) take his advice on which creatures consitute sensible pets lol!
Title: Ycan Upcyme Eadignesse 17 Jul 2010 11:58 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, that was unexpectedly fast ending. I liked this story Very much. Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, I know the ending must have come as a surprise in being so fast but I really wanted to use that plot twist ^^

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