a powerful flashback, glad that severus help harry..!! love it!! Happy that Erasmus bonded with crookshank!!
Maybe I'll find this out in the next chapters, but is Harry's wand now embedded in his skin? Or did I misread that? It would be fascinating if it was, and it would make a comment Hermione made earlier about Erasmus not seeing Harry's wand and Hermione saying "no I suppose not" make more sense... :-)
| Title: Chapter 11
| 07 Dec 2010 12:21 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter especially the last part thank you
This really drew me in. I really like the development of character and the evolving relationships. Well done all the way around.
Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next :D
A great chapter, Bil! I'm glad you updated again. The bond between Harry and Hermione is so real...they are everything to each other, but of course that can have a downside too. They are both so wounded that it's bound to cause trouble from time to time, but of course they could never stay angry for long.
I like how Erasmus is slowly coming around, especially the part with Crookshanks.
And the flashbacks are haunting, so tense and so painful. Yet I can't wait to find out what happened, how they escaped and how Voldemort died.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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