| Title: Chapter 15
| 19 Dec 2014 12:54 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter! Not sure where I got to in the story, I seem to have missed some updates, but a wonderful ending
Oooh - I like this chapter. Somehow, I missed it before; dunno how. I love how you've portrayed their collective and individual responses to discovering what Dumbledore has done.
Simply excellent.
I couldn't help myself...I read all 15 chapters today and I can't wait until you are able to update :D
Very insightful and moving. Great chapter.
| Title: Chapter 15
| 08 Mar 2011 11:11 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow what a cliff hanger you have outdone yourself! Thank you so much it's a wonderful story and the way you handle the characters is really amazing thank you so much
Another wonderful chapter Bil!
Oh wow. Update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Eramus.
A beautiful chapter, so well-written, but painful; the emotions are so raw. I'm so glad that Hermione figured out Severus' identity (and that Minerva helped as much as she could). Erasmus needed to know, I think, before he can fully heal.
Hermione is right about Dumbledore...he does love, but his great flaw of always trying to manage everyone, disregarding their own feelings, is so difficult and hurtful for those who are affected.
The flashbacks have been hard to read...I hate suffering...but finally, a sign of hope in it all. I can't wait to read the rest, though I will miss this story once it's finished!
Looking forward to more!
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