Oooh, nice twist at the end. I can't wait for Harry and Erasmus to get together. Surely they must at some point...?
Title: Chapter 3
| 21 Jul 2010 11:14 pm
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Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Wow! It's very dark and sad, but still beautiful.
This is amazing! I can't wait to read more.
It is very true to the characters, and a completely reasonable extrapolation of what could have happened.
More!
Bouncing with eagerness...
K
Ah, slowly doth the plot unveil, promising the revelation of its secrets...
I have a severe problem with this chapter, however. Namely, that there is no 'Next' button after the "To be continued..." Well? *taps foot impatiently* How do you answer for yourself?
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So sad it's over. I wish it were a bit longer to show us some interaction between Snape and Harry. Even so. Well written, slightly heart-breaking and perfect all around! As always, Bil. :)
Fabulous start! I can't wait to read more...
Ooh! Interesting concept here! I look forward to the next chapter!
Great story!
I'm so glad that the Grangers have taken Harry in, and made him feel like a normal kid. Very original twist. I can't wait for the next chappie.
please cool so far! more please
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