I really love the way in which you describe Harry and Hermione's careful routene; it really makes it sound as if they've returned to early childhood which, I suppose, is their aim as, then, they knew nothing of magic. The flashback scene is very interesting and I can't wait to read more
GAH! Grrr... I know I really shouldn't point fingers, but that cliffhanger is EVIL incarnate! *mutters about writers attempting to drive their readers to the brink of insanity*
I really like this chapter, with its glimpse of their stilted 'everyday' life. It evokes many more questions than answers, but I think you did that on purpose. I'm going to be a nutcase before this tale ends, I just know it.
^^ Great chapter - now GET TO WORK so I can read more. :D
| Title: Chapter 4
| 22 Jul 2010 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Peg (Anonymous)
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I really like this so far. It stands to reason that Harry would not have survived the war unscarred. Dumbledore just can't stop sticking his enormous nose into other people's business, can he? All for the greater good, of course. I wonder, though, what has happened to Ron?
| Title: Chapter 4
| 22 Jul 2010 6:27 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Wow, thanks for the chills... That last bit was terrifying. And the part about Erasmus' eyes, not being soulless. I really enjoy the way your write.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 21 Jul 2010 11:14 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Wow! It's very dark and sad, but still beautiful.
This is amazing! I can't wait to read more.
It is very true to the characters, and a completely reasonable extrapolation of what could have happened.
More!
Bouncing with eagerness...
K
Ah, slowly doth the plot unveil, promising the revelation of its secrets...
I have a severe problem with this chapter, however. Namely, that there is no 'Next' button after the "To be continued..." Well? *taps foot impatiently* How do you answer for yourself?
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Oooh... very intriguing start. Can't wait to see where it goes. I'm also hoping for the answers to the many questions this chapter evokes.
I like the different angles you chose to take with this particular challenge. Nicely done!
So sad it's over. I wish it were a bit longer to show us some interaction between Snape and Harry. Even so. Well written, slightly heart-breaking and perfect all around! As always, Bil. :)
I feel for Dumbledore. After all, those things he did, it was 'the lesser evil of the two' kind of choice. Poor everyone.
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