I so love tormented souls. Harry's very messed up, isn't he? I'm glad Hermione's there for him.
Fabulous start! I can't wait to read more...
Ooh! Interesting concept here! I look forward to the next chapter!
Great story!
I'm so glad that the Grangers have taken Harry in, and made him feel like a normal kid. Very original twist. I can't wait for the next chappie.
Aw, poor Harry.
I feel bad for Sirius. I hope that he can give Sirius a chance, and maybe have the home that he deserves.
Erasmus is Snape. so Erasmus doesn't remember his old life. How old is he?
You've done a great job with this challenge; it's so intriguing.
Oh, I wonder how Harry killed Voldie.
What did Dumbles do to Snape? Yikes, great beginning Bil.
please cool so far! more please
I really enjoyed the Severus/Minerva interaction and your description of Harry's life with the Grangers is lovely.
A wonderful chapter, heartbreakingly poignant. I loved how you portrayed the characters' fragility and I am intregued that magic seems to hurt them
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