This is good. Your broken boys and girl are well drawn. Dumbledore is in character, trying so desperately to do what is "best", and failing. And failing. I love sneaky Minerva! I also like how Harry defeated Voldemort, not alone, but in his own way, and with a little/lot of help from his friends. Well, friends now.
Looking forward to reading more!
K
Another wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see how our new 'golden trio', as I have come to call Harry, Hermione and Erasmus, deal with Hogwarts and vice versa.
Oh wow, can't wait for more
| Title: Chapter 17
| 22 Jun 2011 9:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow a really powerful chapter with great writing you set the scene so well thank you
Whoa! What a great chapter.
I really hope that Erasmus has enough of Snape's logic left in him to explain to Harry that he did exactly what he had to do. No more, no less.
Poor Harry, carrying around so much fear.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 18 Jun 2011 6:03 am
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| Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous)
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Wow... Just wow. I sat here and read from chapter 1 to the end of this and can only say wow.. I love how you've portrayed the three as the young teens that they really are. Not battle hardened soldiers who aren't afraid to fight for the light. They're little more then children. I remember myself at that age thinking I was so great cause I was a teenager, but still feeling like a child all the same. I can see them being just kids trying to act big and bad like all teens do, but with that safety and security most young teens have completely taken away you've shown what would happen. How they shatter and are more like the child teens pretend not to be.
lol Not sure If my ramblings made much sense there.. Either way, you've really written an amazing story here and I can't wait to read more. And damn it Dumbledore! If you keep acting like you're ways are the only right ways then be prepared for Harry's magic and the house to keep you from getting anywhere near it! *hops he chokes on a lemon drop*
AWESOME CHAPTER.
Can't wait to read the next. ^^
Oh wow. That's is...spellbindingly incredible. Just wow. Update soon.
poor boy. so simple but so horrible. what a trial. wonder if that called the soul piece out of him and all the other horcruxes
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