This really drew me in. I really like the development of character and the evolving relationships. Well done all the way around.
Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next :D
A great chapter, Bil! I'm glad you updated again. The bond between Harry and Hermione is so real...they are everything to each other, but of course that can have a downside too. They are both so wounded that it's bound to cause trouble from time to time, but of course they could never stay angry for long.
I like how Erasmus is slowly coming around, especially the part with Crookshanks.
And the flashbacks are haunting, so tense and so painful. Yet I can't wait to find out what happened, how they escaped and how Voldemort died.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
oh crap..... interesting story, haven't read one like it ever. I am slightly freaked out but in a good way.....
Yikes!! Woah. Great chapter. I love the emotions, depth and progression in this story. Although it doesn't seem as if Erasmus is progressing much, but he is changing, and I think that that is what is making it so hard for him. Great story. Thanks for the update!
Oh wow. That...is something. I knew things would be difficult but I did not see that coming though perhaps I should have. I really hope someone finds Erasmus before it's too late. Hope you can update soon.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 07 Aug 2010 1:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow very powerful writing thank you
I like the way you've portrayed everyone and how they're dealing with what happened. I also really like how we're actually finding out what it is that happened.
Great chapter - can't wait to see what happens next. Please, update soon.
I really love the undercurrents you're building into the situation in the Granger house. I expect it'll be Severus' curiousity which will eventually bring the three teenagers closer together.
I really love the way in which you describe Harry and Hermione's careful routene; it really makes it sound as if they've returned to early childhood which, I suppose, is their aim as, then, they knew nothing of magic. The flashback scene is very interesting and I can't wait to read more
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