That’s a really unique twist on the Marauders interest in Severus, and a unique spin on Horcrux hunting. I’m hooked!
Oi! What a cliffhanger.
So far I really commend you on your depiction of interaction; I think it's neither too much, nor not enough. I've read stories where the author goes on and on about one character but forgets that there are a lot of others, too. I'm glad that's not the case here.
And I think it's the first story I read where Snape gives up spying for the sake of Harry's wellbeing.
That said, 'IMPERIO' - update story ^-^
(I really hope you mean to continue this..)
Please Severus find your kid! Great chapter, well worth the wait!
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