This was another beautiful chapter of getting to know the real Harry. I loved the concept of attunement.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 13 Feb 2015 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am loving this. Giving the potions a special rythm is especially clever. I don't think I've read that before.
Oh what a great chapter! For a minute I thought the reason Sev had stopped talking mid-sentence like that (when he realized about the occlumency thing) was because his Dark Mark started burning or something, I was so nervous!
Awww, i'm so happy that Severus got on the bed to give Harry cuddles and let him know that he did not kill Sirius.
I really hope they become really close. Being that Harry gave him a hug, I think they have definitely turned over a new leaf!
I hope they both have a happy Christmas!!! Awww poor Sev, alone on Christmas Eve? He needs huggles and cuddles...
wow dahm good job and that can defintly explain Harry's problems with both potions and occlumency
and the Snape Humour glad that I am not the only one who notices that and it was dead on
| Title: Chapter 5
| 09 Aug 2010 12:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous)
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Wow, excellent story. I love the way you've had Severus's opinions of Harry change gradually and not just because he feels sorry for him, but also because he's starting to see evidence he wasn't aware of before. And Harry having an innate talent for potions, that is in fact getting in his way, is a wonderful idea. After all, he had to have inherited something from his mum other than his eyes! ;)
Wonderful angsty stuff and great reactions from Severus. I liked that you had him take a calming draught as well as offering one to Harry and he's acknowledging his own mistakes as well. Really looking forward to more of this story. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 07 Aug 2010 10:52 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Wonderfully written story that needs a hankie alert. Can't wait for more.
I like that Harry has a unique ability to do something with most Potions Masters are unable to master. Great, enjoyable chapter!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 07 Aug 2010 8:51 am
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| Reviewer: miissny1 (Anonymous)
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This was a great chapter, Sev should join the other students and Harry. I am so glad Harry will be taken away from the Dursleys.
Great chapter. The world has shifted for both our men, now the healing can begin. Thanks for the update
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