That was absolutely lovely! Good on Harry for thinking of Filch.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 13 Feb 2015 12:30 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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Harry gave some thoughtful gifts. It was kind and sweet. Aaww. I continue to enjoy this fic. :)
I've really enjoyed these past two chapters. Severus and Harry made great progress in their relationship. I'm glad that Severus recognized how unfair he's been to Harry and has taken steps to correct it. It's fascinating how Harry's magical abilities have wreaked havoc on his potions, but hopefully now Severus will have a better understanding of how to help him. I also loved how Severus explained to Harry that his failure at Occlumency was not his fault and helped him to give up the burden of blaming himself for Sirius' death.
It was fun to imagine Severus playing games with the students and I'm glad that he's going to join them for Christmas dinner. It was really nice of Harry to give gifts, not only to Severus, but to Filch as well. I really enjoyed that scene, and hope that Harry's kindness will have unexpected dividends in the future.
Great job!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Aug 2010 6:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Angela (Anonymous)
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I can't say enough how much I love this story!!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Aug 2010 8:55 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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This was an amazing chapter. Just goes to show what simple kindness can do.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Aug 2010 8:55 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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This was an amazing chapter. Just goes to show what simple kindness can do.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Aug 2010 8:43 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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I absolutely loved it!! I am so glad that Harry gave a gift to both of them, but most specially Filch. I have felt bad for him as he is portrayed in the canon and would love to see him getting a bit more attention and maybe even love from Harry and perhaps others too. I liked how the Hufflepuffs took care of Harry and how you have written Snape's thoughts. Well done! I will look forward to the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Aug 2010 7:41 am
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| Reviewer: Raven (Anonymous)
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I really love this story. I like how you managed to change Snape's perception of Harry and the bit about the post-it notes was hilarious. Great job! Hope to see more and what happens at the Christmas party!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Aug 2010 2:32 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Great story! Keep posting!!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Aug 2010 12:29 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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A question: "Harry shifted uncomfortably whilst Eric gave his house mate a playful swat around the ear. 'Don't be so disrespectful Eric, Professor Snape is not all bad." Shouldn't Eric have said Morgan??
Otherwise the chapter was good, poor Harry with Mr. Filch. He just can't do anything right in that man's eyes.
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