| Title: Chapter 1
| 20 Jul 2010 4:45 am
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| Reviewer: Ray22 (Anonymous)
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I love the Story!
please continue!
To quote Oliver Twist: "More, please? May I have some more?"
I like this very much! Having broken a rib myself, I really cringed when I realized that Harry's hadn't finished healing after more than 12 weeks. I suppose that the lack of proper medical care kept them from fusing properly.
It's a shame that it took something like this for Severus to change his perspective of Harry, but the way he is written in canon, it really makes sense that it would be something so very drastic.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Good start. It's nice that Snape is slowly changing his opinion of Harry.
Do more!
haha Christmas cheer runs out ! midnight on 25th XP funny!!
Great first chapter :D I can't wait to read more of this story, so update soon ^_^
I absolutely love this so far. Please update soon.
This story is as wonderful as I remembered it, and I'm very thrilled that you've posted it here!
I can't wait for the next chappie! :)
Great start! I can't wait to read more.
I liked seeing Snape take care of a sick Harry and identifing with him a bit. I loved Snape's comment about Christmas cheer. lol
Excellent chapter!
interesting I would love to see more!
Great start! I can't wait to find out what will happen now that Severus' perceptions have been thoroughly destroyed.
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